Completely by accident twilight will discover why everyone says it's not so great to live forever. While sleeping Twilight does a spell by accident whats spell is it, what will happen? (Read to find out)..... (Read with http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SJ0Q--c1xGs) for full feel effect.
P.S Just a quick sad story to read, before I write one of my biggest stories yet. Hope you enjoy.
P.P.S I've been asking for dis-likes on my other stories simply because I was getting a-lot I really am trying on this one, and if you don't like it could you just send feedback and not dis-like it. It actually hurts when someone puts alot of time into a book just to get a bunch of thumbs down, but I can't control you guys so do whatever you want it would just be nice tho :) (Sorry to have wasted your time with this have fun reading.)
Nice,
3144177 Thanks.
Wait, is that your cover art?
3144211 HA!
I could only wish. No I'm not good at drawing I would be able to look at it and re-draw it, that's about it. 
3144219 You might get better if you practiced, my friends keep complimenting me all the time when I'm drawing ponies though it's starting to get annoying now
3144234 Yeah I could imagine that, I can draw up close drawings of eyes that's about all I'm good at.
3144244 Yeah, I have had a lot of practise at drawing Rainbow Dash now, obviously cause she's my fave pony
I always seem to be good at drawing things I like
3144291 What do you use to draw with, and what kind of paper?
3144299 I mostly draw with a pencil so I can shade in, rub out if there is a mistake and make the pictures more realistic
Though sometimes I just use a pen but seriously a pencil seems more better to me
I just use my big sketch pad though there's like only one page left and a few spaces for drawings- I draw way to much!
So now I'm just kinda stuck with that and A4 paper which isn't bad but I prefer professional sketch paper, probably because I seem to be the real artist
3144319 Right on.
I'm gonna have to get some pencils and artist supplies, I've been wanting to draw for a long time just never really have time. busy busy busy 
3144330 Yeah, you could try and draw Flutters maybe
3144355 She is my fav pony
So how did you make that pony in your avatar I have an oc, but how do I make him like yours?
3144384 search pony creator on google and then click the link that says General Zoi's pony creator then you make your pony when you are on the pony creator game and you can save the picture to your computer and crop and do what you like with it. I cropped mine and have you noticed she's wearing shades now?
3144407
iv used that to create my pony just never thought about cropping /)(>.<)
3144416 Oh right, just crop with "Untitled Paint" and then it should look good. See how I cropped the head of mine? It looks better to me but you can do something else if ya'll want to
3144426 I'm gonna go with the head picture I just got done making my old O.C I just have to save and crop :)
3144473 Cool, I like it
I prefered my oc facing the comment as if she is saying: Sup bro? Lol
3144535 Ha thanks
I was going to make it that way, but I couldn't find the flip button 
3144542 You know on "Paint" the button that says rotate? click on it, scroll down and click on flip horizontal and that should do the trick
3144584 Thx a ton
3144598 No prob, I love helping people/ponies out
Could I get some explanations for why the dis-likes are coming up or are you just going to leave me hangin....
can i offer a suggestion?
3147454 Of course.
Then she dies
I hope Dashie and Flutters don't die
3147520 Nyx From Past Sins
This is a really interesting story so far.