A long-lived mercernary with ties to a faction that only existed in the past.
A godlike gatekeeper, whose rage torments his mind from day to night.
A twisted reaper whose prison is the only one in death.
A guardian, whose failure and inaction cost him his charge and purpose.
Four champions who join themselves in common interest to get back to Runeterra, with their only way back lying in cooperation with the inhabitants of Equestria and the discovery of an ancient evil, a shadow of its former self.
Who will come out the victor? And who will come out with shadows in their heart?
Chapters (3)
Uhhh ok then I like it as u see I'm a lol fan. I will like and read later.
Interesting enough, will fav and look forward to future chapters... oh and Thresh FTW
hrm, i havent played LoL personally, but i am liking this story so far... plus Thresh and Jax seem like the kind of badasses i would play as
As a person that has played LoL, Dota, and HoN, and spent countless hours in all three titles, I must say that this is written incredibly well.
Each character is written well, as their lore says, and you stick to your guns flawlessly. Jax was just as I expected him to be- better, even. Eventually glory WOULD get tiring, and I was surprised to see that sort of angle for Jax, but after thinking about it, it makes sense. Everyone else is good, too. I don't feel like ranting forever, but yeah, this is great.
Very, very little grammar/spelling/punctuation errors, which is always good. The writing is fluent, quick, and it manages not to drag on, even though this was nearly 7k words and all that really happened was they got sent to Equestria.
Hats off to you, sir. Fav'd and liked, and I'll be waiting for the next chapters eagerly. After seeing how you pulled off the first chapter, I'm interested in seeing just where you're going to take this storyline, exactly.
3133795 Much appreciated! Good to see even a portion of my writing ability has come back, even after a prolonged absence from this site for quite a while. I hope I will not disappoint.
3134437
Absence?
Who are you, exactly?
3134634 No one you would know. I just took a break, all my stories went on hiatus, I lost interest, so I've started anew, positive and negative expectations hopefully subverted.
3134816
Oh, alright. Well, you're still good, so don't worry.
3134816 the fking kids these days working on new metas. Here's what u do. PICK A FKING CHAMP AND FIND A WAY TO BUTT RAPE PPL WITH THE SAME CHAMP. For example
(In the story the summoner used Graves and them switched to Jax.
Graves-adc, marksman
Jax-jungler,solo top and DPS
HUGE DIFFERNCE.
that is all.
3135662 His mechanics were likely lacking a fair bit. Plus, Jax has always been good for the... new summoners...
3135715 key word NEW uhh kids these days
Also if I went to rune terra I would tell every body there that there world is a fake and I know every thing.
3135812 I'll keep it in mind.
Hope you update soon :)
Bad writer my ass. I'm am so very compelled right now. There are so very few league fanfic's and even fewer decent ones that its nice to see an new take on a champion(s) moving universes. Granted I might be biased because renek's my favorite champion ever and i love redemption fic's and whatnot. Either way I'm eagerly awaiting more.
Bullshit
You don't have bad writing all you need is inspiration and more league
Add me (Zhipeng222) btw I'm always ADC or mid or jungle
Also use Jax Jesus mode always dodging attacks like a boss.
3167812>>3167880 Thanks, guys. You really don't have to reassure me, though. I'll let the ratings do that for me. Not fishing for compliments, here. But it does feel nice.
3167923. NP I hardly see league related stories and well written one in a while since most of them died out but keep up the good work.
Yeah, this was pretty good. You can calm your pants about being a bad writer. Calm them.
Dude, don't you dare give us this 'Im bad' BS. I tip my hat to you sir. This fic is great, I approve! Only thing it could use are some more chapters, but I'm sure you'll get to that.
Truth be told, this fic motivated me to continue my own LoL fic. Definitely got some ideas for when I'm done with my current project.
Anyway, fic is awesome, keep it up, and have a nice day.
3169988 I'm just gonna completely remove the first part of that AN. I'm not feeling any depression or something towards my writing, lol. It was just a small aside, nothing more.
This is really good, don't stop. Keep uploading this fast! This is awesome
This story is awesome. Keep up the good work.
love the story and the champs you picked.
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Liking it so far. Keep it up!
I'm really enjoying your take on a restored Renekton. It's quite interesting to see him trying to figure out how to make up for his actions when he was crazy.
And this Thresh, too
Write on,
Legion
Update when :(?
Step 1: Search for MLP LoL stories.Check.
Step 2: Stumble across a lot of crappy stories. Check.
Step 3: Stumble across your story. Check.
Step 4: Read the chapters available. Check.
Step 5: Cry tears of joy at what may just be the best story on FIMfiction. Checkcheckcheckcheck.
Step 6: Wait for the next chapter to come out.
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Fuck.
just so u know thresh is not from runeterra
he's from the shadow isles, ya dummy 
no offence
I need mores, Please! MOAR!!!
3372483 That was pretty much my reaction to this story as well. I can't wait to read more... Wait.
3541185 he never actually originated from the shadow isles, I believe when he was human his lore stated he was a warden somewhere in runeterra, known for his brutality and loving of executions. One day a prison riot broke out and his prisoners hung him, an ironic end for an executioner. Well. He was reborn as...that.
It's a damn shame thresh found the author of this story. I had some fun with it.
MOAR I NEED MOAR
So far, very good!
Very interesting characters you picked! And I like the way you write Thresh! He's my favourite champ!
I will be tracking this story like a hawk! I hope you update soon!