Pinkie Pie and Fluttershy try out a fun new interrogation method on a changeling spy they've captured.
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I most certainly AM enjoying this story and the direction you're taking it, even considering how strange the premise in general is.
Keep up the fantastic work!
3149287 Muchas gracias. I'm so glad you're enjoying it.
but... the clop wont be over completely will it?
3150346 Nawh, there will be some more later; it just won't be the main focus of the story. c:
Your profile pic is adorable, by the way! >3<
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thank you, Changelings ftw.
3150665 indeed.
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What i find interesting here, is that Pinkie is hiding a Changeling. Its always Twilight or Flutters, even though i think a story where Rarity hides one would have far more potential. What do you think?
3151367 Well, the reason I used Pinkie Pie instead of one of the others is because I figured everypony else would be more serious about their interrogation methods, but Pinkie... she just wants to have fun. I wanted it to be somepony who would be likely to want to tickle a changeling. xP
The reason she didn't tell anypony else is that she knew they would spoil her fun by sending him to the princesses in Canterlot for a more "proper" punishment.
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Im just glad that its different here.
3151527 me too. c:
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what do you think about Rarity hiding a Changeling? It definetly would give room for A LOT of hilarious scenes. (Rarity is my third least favorite pony so if I like the idea...)
3151555 Oh dear, I could just see her trying to dress up a changeling in "fashionable" clothes to disguise him/her. xD
When you first mentioned the possibility of Rarity hiding a changeling, I thought to myself "No bucking way would that ever happen," but when I thought about it for a little while, I realized it's not as outrageous as it seems. Rarity represents the element of Generosity, so I could see how she might be inclined to generously extend a helping hoof to a creature as pathetic and sad as a lone changeling. (She'd probably be inwardly repulsed by his/her appearance, but since Rarity is quite civilized, she would probably at least try not to show it.)
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same reation as me when i first thought over who could fit. i However, now i think Rarity is actually the best Character to pull it off with, also never used before for that, so a definite bonus. I mean, Twi was a good choice (FOR SCIENCE) but is completely overused now.
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I got through any of the mane 6
Aj doesn´t work she lives with a big family how would she hide a Changeling. It also doesnt suit her.
Pinkie: Could be funny, but its sooo hard to write Pinkie staying in Character.
Dash: ... What kind of plot could evolve from that? i have no idea.
Fluttershy: its reasonable that Flutters would help a hurt being Changeling or not, but what plot happens next? They slowly grow together as friends (or closer) and either it gets killed by her other friends or happy end next. not good for a long story, but is a good small one which warms your heart...
if you hadn´t read it about 50 times already.
Twilight: Plot: Twilight researches Changelings. not much Slice and life potential in my opinion. also happened to often
now think about all the hilarious events that could accur when a Changeling has to cope with Rarity´s personality, her many edges, her need to have everything perfect, just rarity. I cant see why there is NOT A SINGLE STORY with that concept yet.
3151715 Oh trust me, this one is centered mostly around Fluttershy, but it will be very different. I don't want to give away too much of the plot, but I can tell you that it won't be all sweetness all the time, and it will only superficially (sometimes) appear to be "romantic."
Basically, the changeling character is based on someone I know who is, well... let's just say he's a very confusing character. I'm still not sure whether the readers will love him or hate him, but for me, he's someone very dear to my heart. All I can say is he's not someone to be trusted, ever, and I really hope that doesn't give anything away...
As for the Rarity x Changeling story, if I weren't already doing this one, I might attempt that. It could be fun. The only problem is I'm not sure how well I could keep Rarity in-character without running out of things to do with her. She never was my favourite, so I'm not so familiar with her personality and hypothetical reactions.
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just help spread the idea and then we can just wait. and hope. FOREVER
3155689 Hey, I just had a cool idea. o3o
What if Rarity adopted a baby changeling and raised it as a pony, teaching it the ways of fashion and beauty and generosity?
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together with the way of the drama queen? AWESOME!!!
need both!
Being a prisoner, casually. I don't know how I didn't know that this chapter was out until now, but I think it's time I be a bit more productive with my comments. So for stater you should really work on proper spacing. Even though the lines don't just keep going from one side of the screen every time, it's still largely a massive wall of text. You should probably put an extra space so instead of
It looks like
The spacing makes it far more appealing to the eyes. So it's rather than Though 73 likes tells me people aren't bothered by the lack of space. So yeah, there's a big comment for you.
~A Dark Reminder
3156814 Ah, yes. I knew it seemed a bit crowded. lawl.
I usually do add the extra spaces like that, but for some reason I didn't this time. I'll fix that tonight when I'm editing for other reasons and adding my new chapter. c:
I'm really grateful to have cool people like you following my story.
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Oh Thanks.
i you all and don't reply just look at this photo before you do http://24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m9tlqr8hoi1rfvb7ho1_500.gif
When they started the board game, Fluttershy rolled a 3 and a 5, which is 8
Then the Changeling rolled a 4 and a 6, which is 10,
Yet you said the Changeling was one space in front of Fluttershy.
Just thought I should point that out to you.
3177378 -le gasps-
I always knew I was really bad at math, but... I'm surprised I didn't catch this error before. Thank you for pointing it out.
I really hope you keep working on this story,this is awesome.
3438699 I'm glad you like it. I think I'm actually going to get back into writing it tonight, so there should be a new chapter tomorrow.
Not usually into adult fics, but I do adore the bonding between the changeling and fluttershy. I hope one day u continue on with this. Would love to see the changeling get a name, and be adopted by Fluttershy. I bet he'd never be low on love at her cottage ;)
I'm also curious about The Test for picking out changelings, that was a neat concept
Ah the Game of Life. Fun fun.
Keep going! ;)
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