"There is no hive!"

Sun at the beach!

I'm sure once the princess hears about your situation, she'll be kind to you.

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I want moar. This is becoming very interesting.

3110179 Well, I'm glad you're liking it. c:
I don't really understand that comment about the beach, but do you really think Princess Celestia would be heartless enough to punish the entire changeling race because of crimes committed by their queen?

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Sun at the beach = Son of a b!tch.

As for the Celestia thing, it'd be dumb of me to say she'd send them all straight to the gallows, because in my story I wrote it so that she was nice and helpful. I guess I did that just for the sake of using the meme.

hilarious clop.

Moar.

3110315 Ohh... xD

Meh. I'm really not that much of a Celestia fan. In the show, I know they try to portray her as nice and caring and all that, but I just feel like she's secretly a bitch who enjoys to watch others suffer.
I mean, uhh... All Hail the Sun-Goddess!

3111502 I'm glad you thought it was funny; that was my goal.

3112101 Don't worry, you'll get moar. The next few chapters will probably not contain any clopping, though, so please don't get your hopes up for that; I would hate to disappoint anypony.

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Don't worry, I like Plot just as much as I like Plot.

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Moar clop!

Oh, will this story be like the Fluttershy x Vesairus (The changeling with the orange headfin, if you know him) pictures?

I don't normally read clopfics, but if you ignore the clop it's actually a pretty good story.

3118260 Oh, I've seen those pictures, but I never knew his name or the story behind them.
Actually, I believe one of those pictures was part of the inspiration for this story.

However, the rest of the story after these first few chapters will not be clop-oriented (although there may be a few more fun scenes just added in here and there), but will rather focus on Fluttershy's emotional distress and confusion caused by the changeling.
I don't really intend it to be a romance, either.

3118708 Thank you. I don't like most clopfics (mainly, it's the ones that contain actual sex), but every now and then I crave a good furry/pony/mythical creature teasing story. Teasing's more fun, in my opinion.

I want fluttershy to adopt him as a pet :3

3132053 Oh good, so you can actually kind of see where this is going.

3137736 I was right??!? AMAZING!!!

"Hey!" he managed between laughs. "Is that really necessary?"
It's called torture for a reason.

3140299 Well... sort of. You'll find out later. c;

3147675 xD yeah.

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I dont mind the story focusing on the thoughts and plot around Fluttershy but I do love a good changeling x pony pairing ;)