3108544 There seems to be a problem with the image you tried to post; it wouldn't show up.
Anyway, I'm glad you like the story. It does need some editing, of course, because I just typed it all between one and three o' clock this morning, so... yeah. I tried looking for and eliminating all the extra spaces, but I guess I missed some. I think that happens because my space bar is broken, and I sometimes have to push down extra hard to get it to work right.
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This is gonna be a good story, I can tell. Only minor problem I saw was sometimes there was an extra space between words. Over all, I like it.
3108544 There seems to be a problem with the image you tried to post; it wouldn't show up.
Anyway, I'm glad you like the story. It does need some editing, of course, because I just typed it all between one and three o' clock this morning, so... yeah.
I tried looking for and eliminating all the extra spaces, but I guess I missed some. I think that happens because my space bar is broken, and I sometimes have to push down extra hard to get it to work right.
Thank you so much for providing feedback. c:
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The image was Morgan Freemen say "He's right, you know." So yeah, I want moar of this story.
3108587 Well you are in luck, because I am currently working on another chapter.
By the way... Morgan Freeman, FTW! /)
Moar! plz
3108997 I'm pretty sure I'll be done with the next chapter by the end of the day. ;3
fuck my life.
when the fuck did i get here?
i cringe at the story, just the OOCship hurts. not to mention the kinky shit going about.