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Nitewalker


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The description alone wins you a thumbs up from me after all incest is wincest.
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3406913 ... but Princest is bestcest. :trollestia:

*deep breath*
HERE WE GO!!!

3406913 I could not agree more :ajsmug:
3406989 All cest is best cest! :pinkiecrazy:
3407027 ROLLING STAAAAAAART!

i like it and please make more chapters

I clicked on this by chance. I was expecting something dreadful. However, once one gets past the premise, ethics, and some of the grammar issues, such as you needing to add commas to direct addresses, author, it's not all that bad. Sure is hotter than I'd care to admit. I'll keep watching and seeing how this turns out.

Just a minor complaint: Is the character named Jonathan or Jonathon? You use both, so please pick one and stick with it.

Okay, I kind of missed what the heck happened at the evening while the fillies were drunk.

3407228 Yes we can't apologize more for the grammar issues that slipped through. I'm running without a prereader at the moment, which makes catching that shit more difficult than usual. Plus work and school kept the pair of us from giving these first two chapters the prereads they deserved.

So yeah, we're a silly pair of bad writers :derpytongue2:

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Well, I could do proofreading and editng for you. Provided the chapters don't exceed 6K words in length, I can handle them.

3407307 It'd be a pleasure, though I can't promise they won't ever hit beyond 6K, but we don't work incredibly fast, so I dunno if it'd really be overwhelming if they did. I'll hit ya up when we start on the next chapter :twilightsmile:

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Got it. Not to worry about me; I'm skilled veteran clop writer. I might be slow thanks to other things demanding my time, but correcting grammar is not difficult for me. It is that more intensive editing is likely to be sacrificed in the event of time crunches.

Ohhh I can't wait to see Breezy's segment. The image of him suckling his moms breasts is enticing.

3407284 I don't think I'll ever sleep again after seeing that ._.

Dat ass, I mean avatar.:trollestia:

Erm.......
Well, I can't help but feel that you missed the opportunity of naming the story, "The MILF 6".
Oh well, I'll probably read it anyway.

so far, this is pretty good
i bet i would still like this,even if it wasn't a clopfic:raritywink:

Berry Blast, Shining Star, Crimson Gust, Fox Trot, Gentle Breeze, and . . . Jonathon. One of these names isn't like the others, one of these names doesn't belong.

*reads description, then starts reading* What the hell am I doing with my life.

the Mane 6's sons banging their mothers... seems legit

I wonder who all the fathers are though?

FYI TO EVERYBODY

WHEN A CLOSE RELATIVE(ex siblings or parents) THERE IS A 45% CHANCE THAT THEY WILL GET SOME SORT OF DISEASE SINCE THEIR DNA ARE SO RELATED.

Thank you very much

Anyway I don't know what I really just read but yea....

3408617 I'm not going to debate the pitfalls of incest, but there's no more health risk to the people involved whether they're unrelated, cousins, or close relatives.

The only likely issue is a higher risk of genetic defect in any offspring should the couple conceive.

3408617 You mean that children brought about via incest might have a few problems?
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Forgive me for not confronting the issue in my porn fic about magical talking horses. Also thanks for educating everyone, I'm sure they'll all immediately stop masturbating at those trufax.

wait so is this r63?....

3409090 "Six young stallions"
what is it then kids of the mane6?....

a tasty, if slightly saltier snack
a tasty, if slightly saltier snack
a tasty, if slightly saltier snack

What the fuck, man...
Apart from that, this coincides with my fetishes quite nicely.

This. 3408474
If I didn't know Johnathan's were a type of apple that would've been very weird.

That was a hot even if... odd rape scene.

I'm not sure why Pinkie is so upset over her husband being gone for a week, but she's not the most mentally stable, whatever.
Berry was awkward, clumsily forceful, unromantic, and overall inexperienced. I love it.

3408493 If you're like me, probably going to Pony Hell for reading stuff like this. I'll save you a seat.

3409320 mind saving one for me as well?

Comment posted by guuguuguuguu deleted Oct 28th, 2013

Why is it I'm fine with everypony elsehaving sex with their sons but with Pinkie it makes me shout...

I await the next chapter with hopes it's Dashie or Twilight.

whoa I saw this I was like wtf I wont be able to read it now but I bet its ok I mean has this ever bin done before?:rainbowhuh:

3409344 Sure, no problem. I'll probably be there pretty early, so I'll pick us the best seats in the house.

Worthy of another chapter. Let's see where you take this. :twilightsheepish:

3409425 good... good please no nose blead seats

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It's okay, I'm in a trio of bad writers. :pinkiesmile:

That was quite enjoyable though. Got a good laugh, and now I can't wait for the Fluttershy chapter... Because I want my friend's waifu in on this XD

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To be honest, I instantly had trouble keeping track of who was who, mostly by how their names were put together. By how name/title logic goes, wouldn't Berry Blast be Berry Pie? Then, wouldn't Shining Star be Shining Sparkle? You see where I'm going with this.

3407139 Will do :twilightsmile:
3408119 Would've been a good title, and please do, let us know what you think!
3408493 You're making all the right decisions, trust me! :scootangel:
3408571 The most legit. You'll see some of them, or at least hear of them, at differing points.
3409151 Is there 'too far' at this point? I think we'd have drawn a line at, like, necrophilia clopfics.
3409209 Just like your typical teenage boy eh? :ajsmug:
3409374 Because it's clearly amongst the best fics on fimfic... duh :rainbowhuh: (This is a joke by the way.)
3409388 But Pinkie loves incest! :pinkiecrazy:
3409435 Because it's just too damn tempting!
3409453 Thanks! :twilightsheepish:
3409508 She'll be getting her's pretty soon! Don't you worry :yay:

Comment posted by guuguuguuguu deleted Oct 28th, 2013

3409507 I'll get something nice and close so we can roast marshmallows on the hellfire.

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The algorithms for the featured box are a strange, confusing, and mysterious beast.

3409577 Don't be so judgmental because I want to stick my dick in that high horse you're ridin'. So uh... deal with it I guess?
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