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I know there was a buncha story before. And it was great, it really was. The placement and use of Rarity and RD was amusing and titillating. I write Dash as a bit of a tease myself so I definitely enjoyed seeing more of what I liked, however...

“My, my. For such great sport, ya do a whole lot a yackin’ and not enough smackin’, RD,” Applejack said.
Rainbow uncrossed her arms and shot a bone-cutting glare at the farmer standing over her. “Well what if I don’t want to, huh?” Rainbow smiled. “Maybe I’ll just leave you hangin’ instead.”
Applejack swung her hips one way, and swung them back the other, ‘thwaking’ Rainbow’s cheek with her rock-solid member. Rainbow sputtered and hardened her glare with a blush. Rarity snorted behind Rainbow with a dainty hand over her mouth.
“And maybe y’all forgot who you’re talkin’ to.” Applejack’s smile completely vanished. She stepped closer, nearing jabbing Rainbow’s eye with her weapon. “Think y’all can take it like Pinkie can?” Applejack took a fist-full of Rainbow hair and craned her head up. “Then get to work.”
A beat of silence. Right there, Rarity was all too certain the two competitors would start fighting. Worse, she feared she’d have to pry them off each other. Rarity fidgeted with her fingers as she gauged the athlete kneeling before the farmer.
“Tch… Jerk,” Rainbow muttered with a darker blush.
“I try,” Applejack replied.
After another beat of silence, Rainbow lunged forward.
“How in the unearthly Hell does she do that??” That was Rarity’s only logical thought.

Do this. Do this part next.

The RD/AJ interaction here was my absolute favorite part. The dominating attitude she took right there was appropriately handled without feeling forced or over-the-top. Yes. that part next. Encore.

...maybe with more cockslapping. Because that's cool too. xD

Wow you've written exactly 3,000 words :derpyderp2:

2960987 But of course.

2962247 I know, right? Applejack's always been the alpha dog to me. Just a little something I had to do :twilightsheepish:

2963073 It's a gift :eeyup:

I'd love to read it!... But I can't... I don't enjoy anything sexual with anthropoids anymore... Sorry.

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Well... That wasn't helpful nor flattering. :ajbemused:

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Oh sorry, where are my manners? It's good that you put something out and I agree completely with your selection of the story! I love futanari myself, and I do like the character selection and paring. Plus, you put exact 3,000 words down! That doesn't come around unintentionally every day!

Futa? You will go far here :pinkiehappy:

2968471 To put this in a song:

Or, to be more fitting:

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You think so? Honestly, I hadn't the faintest idea how the fandom dug this sort of thing. I'm gonna have fun with this... Seriously.

2969106 I'll go far only with PERSERVERENCE!!

I kinda want to see how they'll try to convince Twilight to forgive them all actually, including Pinkie.

2987486 i'm hoping twilight turns out to be more endowed than any of them, and forces all three of them to fuck her and be fucked by her until she's satisfied. that'd be an awesome way to end this!

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Don't worry, y'all! I've planned the ending out for maximum lol-cakes. I think you should love it. Thank you both for commenting and favoriting! And BronyPonyMan... :twilightoops: My Lord, man...

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I'm actually hoping for some magic overpowering the three of them, and then she proceeds to fuck the shit out of them; hard, hours long fucking involving all manners of kinky stuff. And then, when they're all exhausted, she'll throw Pinkie in there who she left hanging (in both senses of the meaning) so that she can ravage them.

Whatever you do though, it's going to to be good.

Oh my gosh, I thought this was a one shot. I'm so glad I was wrong! :pinkiehappy:

Great smut/story so far can't wait to read more. Thanks for sharing.

I love this series , you are such a good writer and I can't wait for more ^^

So, when will you add more to this?

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