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[Romance] [Science-Fiction]
For the first time in recorded history, there was new magic; not just a new spell, or some new field of arcane study. Twilight Sparkle couldn't be more excited, but is she biting off more than she can chew?
Part of the New Magic universe: Just Like Me, Sleep Walking, New Magic
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Okay, I've read it now, and it has thoroughly confused me.
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Details, man!
3095185 Let me put it like this; my dad is obsessed with caves and spelunking. He's even had a novel in the works centering around them for the past thirty years; only just recently did he find the time to seriously get cracking on it. As such, I've heard as much about caves in the past few years than any human will probably hear throughout their entire lifetime. So reading this was kinda hard on the ol' brain.
The story thus far, however, is okay aside from a few spelling/grammar errors.
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Ah, so it's not an accurate portrayal?
3095237 The cave system? As far as those in Equestria are concerned, I see no reason why it wouldn't be.
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Ah, I see :) I was just wondering why you used the word 'confused'. I'm glad it's nothing serious like 'This is impossible to follow' or something like that.
Also, general message to everyone: If you find a grammar or spelling error, send me a PM and I'll see what I can do to fix it up :)
This is amazing man!
This looks interesting... I'll toss it in my read later until it hits about 15k-20k words
I bet it's an iPhone 64.
I loves it, keep going :D
Very good sci-fi themed fic.
No idea why so many downvotes...
I suppose a'human' tag will eventually pop up?
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Nope.
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Okay then.
Intriguing. The technology is recognizably human, yet just futuristic enough that I can't always guess what it does. I look forward to reading future updates.