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ill give it a upvote, however this seems like the final chapter to one hell of a dark story. not a quick one shot.
i highly recommend expanding this a great deal. flashbacks on the throne sorta thing.
much potential but this is wasted as a short one off.
3090428 I agree with him/her.
Ugh, this is really dark and really good. Corrupted Twilight is fun and I'm guessing fun to write as well. I'm tempted to write something darker now, gdi. Slams fist on table. I DEMAND MORE SHORT STORIES, YES.
ILU BTW.
3090428 Also agreed. Heck, this could even be an "in media res" sort of thing...
cool story :3
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im telling you man. this was awesome for a chapter. change this to incomplete and wow us with crazy twily. if this is a good example of your style it could be amazing.
Awesome story!
What Happen, Whit Celestia And Luna =?¿=
My, my, my.
This was certainly an interesting turn of events.
Love it, but I kinda feel like this should be a full fic and not just a one shot. Also, it might be nitpicky, but what exactly did happen with Celestia and Luna?
Seriously?
You're seriously gonna tease us like this?
You did a corrupted Twilight and you COMPLETELY skipped the boss fight?
I'm ... not sure whether to curse you or commend you for doing something original.
Have an up-vote?
Hmm I wonder if Princess Celestia has a plan if Twilight ever became evil, if she doesn't it would be a good idea right now to start planning.
-For the glory of the Armada!
oh COME ON! this CANNOT be a oneshot! THIS CAN BE SO MUCH MORE!
ugh, now my mind is running amuck with how this happened and everything! It's pointedly going to "Twily failed, princess Celestia disowned her, her friends no longer care, the dark magic overtook her in her weak state, she killed Tia and Lulu, NOOOOOOO~"
awesome story has been given an awesome up-vote!
and an awesome Favorite!
3858355 Go read the 'Terror in Equestria' trilogy, if you like this.
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link please? i might have read it already... it sounds familiar.
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So, just to clear up ambiguity, they went to the Crystal Empire, and they failed to stop Sombra and either her friends, her brother or both of them, died in it. So, she became heartless and vented her anger on the one she blamed for sending her to certain doom, Celestia and Luna?
Hello! Have a review. The AU setup of a dark magic-corrupted Twilight is great, but a thousand words just isn't long enough to do such a concept justice.