One day, the Crusaders happen upon Ponyville’s newest, specialty flower vendor: a young mare from Alemaneia named Schneeblume. They think she’s hiding something. Turns out she is, though not in a way they expected at all.
Scootaloo is alone. She's failed her family, her friends, her destiny - everything. Running away from her problems, Scootaloo lost herself in the sprawling city of Las Pegasus. Now, her life is meaningless... until a letter arrives from Ponyvill
While the scars of the War will forever remain, Schneeblume has been helped along by the three Crusaders over the years. Now, she must lay to rest some more demons that have haunted her. To do so, she must return home to where it started: Alemaneia.
Her mother died? do you mean dead used in that sentence perhaps?
You're off to a good start, buddy! Keep it up!
Really good story. Minor corrections here and there but wonderful none the less
Why can't I like this more than once?