Featherflutter

TStranger Than Fiction
MLP: FiM
Dark
Horror
The CMC and friends are on the hunt for candy one Nightmare Night, but get a lot more than they bargained for.
Twilight
Discord
Pipsqueak
CMCs
Featherweight
Featherflutter · 2.6k words · 13 0 · 504 views
TComing To Terms With Coming Out
MLP: FiM
Romance
Sad
Slice of Life
After the trip to Vanhoover, Pipsqueak wants to come out to his parents with Featherweight, but Featherweight is having concerns
Alt. Universe
Pipsqueak
Other
Featherweight
Gallus
Sandbar
Featherflutter · 12k words · 18 3 · 547 views
EIn his care
MLP: FiM
Romance
Slice of Life
While getting ready for a major concert, Octave realizes that Noteworthy has caught hay fever. It is up to him to get him better.
Alt. Universe
Octavia
Noteworthy
Featherflutter · 7k words · 489 views
TMr. Brightside
MLP: FiM
Romance
Adventure
Slice of Life
A struggling Time Turner works to push himself past his lost love for Ditzy
Sex
Alt. Universe
Doctor Whooves
Nurse Redheart
Featherflutter · 3.2k words · 501 views
TShell Shocked
MLP: FiM
Romance
Adventure
Sad
After being given the news of being able to go on the student council trip to Vanhoover, Featherweight and Pipsqueak plan and scheme on ways to make this the best trip ever. Though something seems off with Featherweight.
Gore
Violence
Profanity
Luna
OC
Pipsqueak
Featherweight
Featherflutter · 17k words · 16 3 · 419 views
TA Lovely Lunch
MLP: FiM
Comedy
Sad
Slice of Life
Featherweight and Pip have a pleasant lunch at Sugar Cube Corner
Sex
Pipsqueak
Featherweight
Featherflutter · 1.9k words · 527 views

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Milo_Chalks #24 · Mar 28th, 2018 · · ·

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Thank you! Really, I wish I got more criticism like that. Seriously. I would totally agree with everything you said. This was a real early work of mine and I hope to fix some of this stuff in Bonding Experience.

Really, thanks! And I hope you enjoy the sequel if you want to read it.

-Milo

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Featherflutter #23 · Mar 27th, 2018 · 1 · ·

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I enjoyed the fic. The dialogue between the two main characters was metered well, being boisterous when applicable and timid when needed. There were times when I was a bit confused on how much time had passed, but it was minor confusion. There were some noticeable errors, grammatical and otherwise, but other than that I enjoyed it. For some reason though, I couldn't place the body of Retto with the dialogue and personality of him. What he looks like doesn't show up to me when I try to imagine him from text alone. I think that is just me, though. Overall, I really enjoyed the adventure. It was a nice day read.

Milo_Chalks