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Sundial is not your average pony. Most would assume this is readily apparent, considering he is the adopted child of Princess Celestia herself. Though not many wonder why exactly Princess Celestia so suddenly decided to adopt a little colt. Nopony really wonders why the Prince rarely makes public appearances. Nopony in Canterlot Castle really questions the strange happenings centering around Sundial.

This is all because, for lack of a better word, Sundial is special. He can use telekinesis without magic, he can fly without wings, he has the strength of ten stallions, and perhaps most significantly... he can see how things work. Sundial is a colt gifted with many more extraordinary abilities. Most would say these are blessings, but when you have to spend the majority of your childhood in isolation so you can train yourself not to kill everypony in the room by sneezing, you begin to rethink such a thing. It most certainly doesn't help that he would prefer to keep his abilities a secret...

(Well, I've never written any fanfiction before in my life, so I decided to try my hand at it. I have yet to see a Heroes crossover on FiMFiction, so I figured 'why not?' Knowledge of the television show Heroes helps, but is not required.)

(EDIT: For the time being, this story is on haitus due to a busy life and general lack of inspiration. I'll come back to this at a later date, but don't hold your breath; you'll suffocate.)

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Comments ( 42 )

Oh my god...... this is going to be good!

This is good. Keep going.

You have earned this:moustache:

Absolutely brilliant good sir. I am imensly enjoying this

Ah, that last ability, it takes me back to Doctor Who, when Van Gogh predicted something happening, (Not gonna spoil it for those who are currently watching doctor who) and it was almost exactly in that style. Anyway, great chapter, really enjoyed it.

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Pretty sure he didn't get it from Doctor Who, mostly because painting the future is a cannon ability in Heroes. Though Isaac Mendez had to have a lot of practice before he could paint without heroin. So the real question is, did Sundial shoot up while we weren't looking?

3197413 Eh, it's just what I relate it to the most, but yeah, what you said. Also, he has freaky electrical powers, how do we know if he can't just grow stuff instantly, if you know what I mean.

Never watched the show. I know of the show so I get the idea of what going on here. I am loving it tho I might not know all of the aspects of the show Heroes. The way your pulling off this story its really great from that point of view of the reader never saw the show. That last part kinda made me have chills tho. Wow that was insane! You got my like and fave from me man if stuff like that keeps up I might start screaming at the computer screen! No joke and in a good way. I am impressed dude.

A Heroes Crossover?

Fuck yes!!! :pinkiehappy:

Brilliant so far, keep going!

Must... keep... READING!!!!

I'm just waiting for him to start having the hunger for powers.

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But there are no powers in Equestria for him to hunger for.

...Or are there?

Perhaps an explanation for Pinkie Pie's eccentric happenings?

How long until 'Sundial' wants to know what makes her... tick? :twilightoops::pinkiesad2:

Omgosh! This is fucking awesome!

I really enjoyed reading this, Sylar was always one of my favorites. Only real problem that I have with it is that it seems a little rough to me, but that maybe just be me reacting to your choice of tensing. I'm looking forward to seeing what you'll do with this.

Puberty will not be kind to this kid.

This fic is grandly under-read. It's really nice.

I have noticed some mistakes, but I'll try to find them later.

This chapter is like man of steel. Just ponified!:rainbowkiss:

The issue with tenses is throwing me off, as some others have mentioned, but that’s small potatoes, really.

I've not watched Heroes in such a long time, i was reading and after peter was revealed i said "Peter Petreli...That sounds familiar... This is a heroes crossover... OH!"

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That is going to be most readers reactions...
Brilliant.

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Sundial is best druggy!

ESP? That's one hell of a power. I wonder if he'll foresee Discord's return.

This must be Sylar turned into a pony.

Hmm, this story reminds me of Heroes.... wait, did you ponify Sylar? This cannot end well. :pinkiecrazy:

Please get this off of Hiatus!

I'm really disappointed this is on hiatus. This is really interesting, and I want to read more. MOAR I TELL YOU!

Do you plan on giving Sylar non-canon abilities? I mean, he certainly had enough time to acquire a bunch more, so he would, theoretically, have many new capabilities. Just wondering.

but don't hold your breath; you'll suffocate.

This made me chuckle. Thanks for that.

Is it weird for me to think of sylar from heroes when I read the description?

I want to see what makes the elements... Tick!

I want to see what makes you...tick.:pinkiecrazy:

I guess I'm a bit late to the party aren't I?

Can't wait for you to continue this. If you need ideas I could help.

ok the description of the story made me interested then i saw it hasnt been updated since 2013, i was disappointed.:facehoof:
hope your still planning to write this.:facehoof:
woot!:trollestia:

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Come backkkkkkkkkkk~

I like the story. I hope you continue.

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