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sweet, will we see any naval and air battles?
3115850 Possibly.
3115852 An ally? She wanted to enslave him, with predictable results. It's also unlikely that she would have entered the war on his side since he wants total domination, which would mean subjugating the Changelings. Thanks for the comment.
3115921 Possibly.
Good job, it's still that style that feels cold, but perhaps you write it the same way Der Führer would write it.
I've also noticed a few errors, such as "poor" when you meant "pour". And you wrote 16mm mortars. That would be massively underpowered for a mortar, unless it's handheld.
3116059 Where is the first error? Which chapter?
two problems with an otherwise perfect chapter the Maus weighed 208 tons with fuel and shells also i doubt twelve maus 2 could takedown the tower. unless they concentrated fire on one of the supports but as usual excellent work also thanks for throwing the maus in there
3116515 No problem.
3116518 you have earned the like and fav many times over
3116522 Thanks for the support, I really appreciate it!
3116532 i appreciate good stories and you sir provided one and best of all you took feedback and incorporated it and for that i am truly thankful
3116566 You're welcome. I really enjoy doing this.
3116630 as do I but unfortunately i don't nearly have the same type of audience that you do almost none of them ever comment which is what sort of drove me into your story.
Not long now until he world is concurred. Down with Equestria, long live Fuhrer Dieter!
HerE COmEs DiScORd!
3117275 Heil Dieter!
3117275 HEIL!!!
I guess you could say...
all's fair in love and war.
Also, looks like he fixed the Maus. Good job.
Still should have called it the Mammut.
6323235 if i remember it right there was alreay something called mammut
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Response: It's a german TD.
Oh author I'm in love with you now!!!!!!you put the mous super heavy tank in here!!!!!!