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Oh bit I love this but here a thing MP-40 have a 32 round clip and a average solder carries about 3 to 5 clips maybe more so Dieter is going to run out soon and fact magic can be use as weapon but it needs moar power and concentration
Also if possible u may want to write a longer chapters its easier than writing a little but don't write too much I recommend about 1-3 thousands words
3090330 Dieter has twenty clips. Let's just say that he can carry it with his badassity.
3090343 Yeah, I try to write around a thousand words each chapter. I try to keep it short and sweet, that way my chapters are more topical. It also helps me to pump them out in large numbers. Thanks for the suggestion!
3090393. Yup but a AVERAGE soldier hold 3-5 clips back then mostly cause so many ppl die back then they didn't want to waste bullets for dead ppl but hey back in Berlin Dieter was about to retreat or hold his spot he he needs ammo
3090393 also ill proofread your chapter if u want
3090426 That would be much appreciated! Thank you!
3090457. No problem I like reading stuff that aren't publish YET !!!
3090497 Please make sure that your proofread quickly though! I try to put up at least three stories a day. Thank you again.
3090696 yeah send me the chapter by mail and ill read it and tell u as soon as possible ok also check out my stories derp
A great example of how Dieter's military knowledge serapes from that of an average guard. When considering the topic of magic, Dieter could make some connections to the Nazi occult studies and the meaning of the swastika. He probably brushed such things off in the past due it being superstitious nonsense in his eyes, never really believing in the aryan race stories. Celestia's bird is a phoenix, so it should probably not be dead. Personally I think that scene was funny. Eventually Dieter would become bored with the ponies and disgusted at their weak nature, probably considering leaving them for some other location. Maybe looking into other species such as the gryphon.
3090758 Good idea. Of course, Dieter may just end up eating the Griffins. He probably will have fun killing dragons though!
3090735 Certainly.
breaking legs in a spar? daaaayum.
3090758 true griffin are a symbol 4 war (THE MORE U KNOW)
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That is cool, although lets be realistic. Killing dragons takes up heavy artillery and ammo that Dieter just can not afford to waste without good cause. Also, he should probably not waste any more ammo and just rely on his skills and knife to intimidate. Gryphons were supposed to be more combative then ponies, so maybe he could find common ground with them, or if not the he could just criticize them and kill some of them if they get in his way.
YASSS!!
PUNCH IM!
PUNCH IM INTO A SALAD SAUSAGE
3090822 I think instead of dragons or griffins, Dieter is probably going to bump into changelings. What should I have him do to Queen Chrysalis?
Something has come up today. I regret to inform everyone that I can only afford to write one chapter today. There will definitely be more tomorrow, though.
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Changelings have more potential value as an army resource, however their feeding habits and failed attempt in conquest makes them weak and Chrysalis a pitiful and incompetent leader. Dieter would not be impressed with her power all that much because he is well experienced in the art of espionage, disguise, and infiltration. Some units were trained to disguise themselves when in enemy territory and to blend in when infiltrating a community. He will probably mock the nature of her species and how they depend on emotions for survival, her leadership and weakness. He would designate her as a lower race and probably kill off some of her changelings and warn to stay out of his way, or kill her if she becomes too annoying. Killing her would have no consequences and the other changelings would be to weak and frightened to retaliate. Maybe some angry ones would, however they are no mach for him as he would not bother wasting ammo on them and simply uses his knife to quickly finish them off. Chrysalis would first not be impressed with his appearance, then she would be disturbed at Dieters lack of or none existence of emotions and declare him as a monster or something soulless. Something that he could take as a compliment rather than an insult. Then she would grow to fear him for her late realization of what a danger he truly is, realizing too late and possibly sealing her fate along with her kingdom.
3093868 Actually, they attack him, and he beats the shit out of them. I don't like Changelings much, so I simply killed them off. You can be sure that the battle is epic, though. The chapter is going through proofreading right now.
Thanks for the idea though!
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Is this before or after the wedding?
3093970 After. I didn't really mention it though. But the idea is that the Changelings are trying to avoid the vindictive Equestrian Royal Guard. Chrysalis tries to captured Dieter for his weapons and military capability, with predictable consequences. Sorry for the spoilers.
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It is alright, it does not make the story any less enjoyable. On the contrary, it gives me something to look forward to.
3093981 Thank you again for the support.
I added a "theme song" for the story in the description. Does everybody think that it is fitting? I think it captured Dieter's cold calculation.
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These are only 1000-ish words long.
It shouldn't take you too long to write them, no?
3094023 It doesn't take long to write. I just got a proofreader, so it will take longer for them to be uploaded.
OH MY GOD YES I LOVE IT
YOOOOO he killed philomina!!! I laughed in that part
I might be a bad person for that
Brilliant idea, tell the potential enemy everything about your capabilities. Such SS material right here.
Wait, what happened to phoenixes being reborn when dying?
Good old Luna. I always-
...Never mind.
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They let him do this to every other guard he's faced, and the captain? And he's letting them know what he's capable of?
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They're horses. They can't re-create gunpowder weaponry even if they tried.
Also, they simply can't beat Dieter even if they adjusted to his tactics. They're horses that cringe at violence.
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Well, gunpowder was made on accident from an alchemical experiment, so...
Well German, Twilight 's gonna kill you