Ponyville’s mailmare finds herself in the center of unwanted attention. Something she really could do without and struggles to escape from.
Meanwhile Rainbow Dash loses herself in the latest Daring Do book and comes to a surprising conclusion after finishing it in record time.
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What a cunt
I hate him already. Time for him to be introduced to [youtube=www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z8VD4JXUozM]Ti Kwan Leep.
So far, this story has been well written. None of the characters have been OOC, I haven't noticed any glaring grammar or spelling issues, and the narrative quality has remained inviting.
Personally, I think the whole Rainbow Dash meme thing ("10 seconds flat", "so awesome", etc.) has been played out by now, but it's up to you and didn't break me out of the story too much.
We really haven't had that much yet in terms of plot line, but already Derpy's being framed for a crime she didn't commit, so I'll assume that's gonna pick up in Chapter 2. Very well done so far!
Ruh-roh. RD? Stop. Helping...........
I spy with my eyes something GREY starting with the letter D.
This is turning into an issue of Green Lantern from the eighties; eventually, Twilight will end up stating that Ditzy is safe from the Riches, safe from prying eyes and safe from HER.
Loved Rainbow's response. She did really do. Ah well. Good job on this story, though it did feel a bit rushed. Good luck on your next.
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I admit that it was rushed.
The next stories will be shorter and hopefully of better quality.
Once I find the time I might go back and edit this entire thing about a bit.
Until then I will try my hand at comedy..... Oh Dear....
Finding stories like these is like digging though a box of old knick-knacks.
Dig through all the crap until you find the one thing that makes you smile like an idiot!
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I am happy that you enjoyed it.
The butler really did do it...the son of a mule!
Loved it! Great story. Nice, simple, heartfelt and cute. Well done!
" I have all the time I need and all the Time I want" This has nothing to do with this story, but when Rainbow Dash said that line, I had some Twilight Zone flashbacks to perhaps one of the more disturbing episodes.
Rarity,
you put a VERY intriguing premise into my head, and now I have the very appealing image of Derpy as a Princess or Derpy like James Bond 
. Someone should write a story about Derpy/Ditzy being a princess (minus the Alicorn bit of course)
Gets better and better, the more I read!
3049649 Derpy/Ditzy Doo?