After remembering some questionable advice, Scootaloo decides to risk it all in an effort to fly.
She casts her fear aside, just like her Idol Rainbow Dash would do.
Rainbow Dash faces some unwelcome truths when her number one fan goes missing.
My first story to be posted and sets the groundwork for others I am writing on.
Rated Teen just to be on the safe side.
Takes place before the season 3 finale.
There is just one OC with a minor role.
If anybody feels like making some cover art please let me know.
Chapters (10)
Oh no! I hope Scootaloo doesn't get too badly hurt. Come on RD give her some attention! I look forward to your next chapter.
I like it! This thing needs more upvotes.
Great story! Write more please.
Arg! It pains me to see so little upvotes for this! It's so well done (to me anyways)!
Awesome story, definitely deserves more views, likes and favourites
And maybe a feature on EQD
Most excellent story AND ending.
Amazing story. It deserves more likes as it has!
the story is great but there are a ton or errors. especially in this chapter. I enjoyed the development this chapter had tremendously though
Best. Story. Ever.
Just in the sweet spot between 'da feels' and 'pure entertainment'.
I love that the ponies are really in character (RD is just perfect.).
Would make a nice MLP ep! (although the theme would be a little hard for a show for small children.)
Finally somepony puts Dash in her place.
This had a cute ending. Does it have a sequel?
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The theme of Rainbow Dash and Scootaloo is continued in nearly all my stories thus far.
Ponycare would take place a short time after this story, so you might want to check it out.
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Awesome. If I were to read your stories in order from this one. It'd be Ponycare than wich ones? And the Theme is it with an Adopted Scoots? Or is it random?
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All of my stories contain a little bit of Dash/Scoots.
I try to show how they are bonding more and more, until one day...maybe...RD might get a certain idea in her head.
If you read my stories from oldest to most recent you will see a few sprinkles of their bonding mixed in.
Except maybe Dressed for Revenge.
set that off near fluttershy and wait for the funniest reaction in the galiscy
Best story intro ever!
...Admittedly, for me that probably just translates to "best story intro I've read in a while", but given how much I've read lately, that still means a lot.
This story actually got me to tear up...
So many feels
oh dear.
No Dash. That is where you should be looking.
have all the slow claps.
wicked moves scoots
save scootsy rainbow!
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agreed
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runaway filly
poor dashie
oh my
scoots is underneath the clouds, dashie
That was great! Scootaloo and Rainbow got the wake-up call they needed and the family they needed.