Dream Time with Fluttershy

by DragonLS

Dream Time With Fluttershy

Dream Time with Fluttershy

They say those who dream, can be stuck in one. Some say it’s a heavenly paradise, and some say it’s a fiery hell. This… is the world, of dreams, a dream where clouds hang overhead, the sun shining brightly as fields upon fields of flowers stretch as far as the eye can see. Green healthy leafed trees shine as the sun sets on them, animals parading about over the meadow of flowers. One such beautiful flower, being a light yellow colored Pegasus, named Fluttershy.

She lays down, back first, across the meadow of flowers with a big smile across her face, enjoying the scent and beautiful colors around here, feeling tranquil, peaceful, and most of all, not in any danger at all. She waves her hoofs about as if trying to make a snow angel from a field of flowers, and rolls across the field in happiness.

She stops rolling to catch a glimpse of a bunny rabbit passing by. She gives it a big bright smile as she pets the top of it with her hoof. The rabbit smiles back as it continues to frolic about the field. She could picture her friends in front of her, having a vast picnic of such delicate sweets and delights, while watching Rainbow Dash flying over above the clouds, shape-shifting them into flowers, bunnies, birds, and many cute animals alike.
It was the greatest paradise Fluttershy could ask for, as if it were very own birthday. Nothing could worry her, nothing could make her cry, and absolutely nothing could ruin this beautiful day she is having.

…Until now.

As she closes her eyes, humming a beautiful tune, she opens them back up to see a horrifying site. The sky had turned a deep crimson red, with red water raining from the sky, as if it were a rain of blood. The trees came alive, with carved out eyes and faces as if they were pumpkin heads. The leaves were a deep colored black as they fell out of the trees branches.

Animals were no longer in sight either, and the flowerbeds around Fluttershy were completely dead; nothing but roots and weeds. As Fluttershy got up and gave a sharp gasp, she could feel the weeds poking at her, scratching her, bleeding her. Her mouth quivered as she immediately got up, and ran. She ran as fast as she could, without even the thought of flying into the sky. She was just too scared.

Ran as she might, she saw some horrifying sights as she passed them by. Several trees were dryhumping one another, as if it were tree-on-tree sex, shoving their barks up the others barkhole. Metal-like traps laid on the ground, snatching any creature up with ease as it gave a blood-gurgling snap when it activates. Several of the woodland creatures fell victim and lay in a pool of intestines and blood.

More tears filled in her eyes, not wanting to see any more of this chaos and destruction. Finally realizing she had wings, she took off into the air, hoping she would get away from everything she has seen.

That was a foolish hope.

She felt a nasty grip take over her body, as she was dragged back into the chaos. A reanimated tree grabbed her and brought Fluttershy up against his face. He smiled an evil grin, licking its tree bark lips, looking at its next meal as it was ‘barked’ from behind by another tree. Fluttershy tried to break free, tears forming in her eyes as she pleaded with the tree not to eat her, or any other monstrous thing to her.

Her sobs only gave the tree more of a reason to use her as a nighttime snack. Not delaying the inevitable, the tree squeezed Fluttershy even harder as she yelped in pain. Doing this, he shoved his hand back towards its throat, along with Fluttershy. With her jammed in its throat, he swallowed a very big swallow, feeling the lumpy Pegasus go down its throat.

Fluttershy could feel herself falling, and falling… falling into an endless sea of dark abyss, with no light of day whatsoever. She tried to flap her wings, but she could not, It was impossible. She no longer had the strength to do such a last attempt of escaping. She lay there, motionless, crying her heart out as the sea of darkness, consumes her…

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Fluttershy gives a very big scream as she sits up in her bed, covered in a giant sweat. Her mouth quivering, her eyes darting back and forth as the moon shined upon her figure, her heart beating at a fast and irregular rate. She breathed in and out, gasping for air as she realized, she was in her own room, in her own bed, and her own fluffy blankets. She started to think herself that it was just a horrible nightmare, just a nightmare that was only there to scare her. As she thought this, she slowly started to calm down.

She closed her eyes for a moment, trying to forget the horrible dream she had. But closing her eyes only made the images of death and chaos come back to her. She shook her head vigorously, trying to tell herself it was just a dream… just a mindless, twisted, but harmless dream…

She laid her head back on her pillow, looking out her window as the moon shined forth. Looking at it for a good full minute, she could feel herself be at peace once more, giving a sigh of relief that it was just a nightmare, and it was all over…

Suddenly, she felt something hop onto the bed in front of her. She yelped in surprise, but realizes, it was just a bunny rabbit. She gave a nervous smile at the bunny rabbit, muttering a little bit how it was just a cute and fluffy bunny rabbit, wanting to sleep with her. The idea of having a sleeping companion helped her relax, as the little bunny rabbit got under the bed covers with her, feeling content with having the Pegasus is accompanied by him.

Both, the bunny rabbit, and the shy but kind Pegasus, drifted off into a deep sleep… But as they slept, the bunny rabbit slowly opened his eyes to look at Fluttershy. Looking at her, the eyes of the rabbit immediately turned to a crimson shade of red, bloodshot with rage and destruction, along with smiling at her with razor sharp teeth.

…It wasn’t over.

Comments

[Mehnlo]

I'm speechless... And not in a good way. For the objective view, this was a good, if not creepy, piece of writing. I did not see any grammatical errors, and it definitely got the point across. There were a few 'good' visuals, and the story will definitely leave a lasting impression. Now for the subjective view. You are a sick bastard, I have no idea how you could ever get an idea like this and I do not want to know. You make me sad, and you made Fluttershy sad. That's illegal you know. God would smite you if he read this... abomination. Having said that, I now need to watch an Episode of My Little Pony, probably the Cutie Mark Chronicles, to get the awful scariness of this story out of my head. Good day sir, I SAID GOOD DAY!!!

While I give a thumbs up, it is for the writing. The writing is good, what you wrote about is not. Now, please if I could read about a good dream she has with nothing bad in it I would be a very happy boy.

[PonyofTacos]

Misleading title is misleading... Still worth a thumbs up.

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245842 Bro I wish I could show you this pic I found of Jesus holding and petting Fluttershy... It is glorious!

[ThePinkazoid]

I liked it, but I'm just a weirdo

[Derpintena]

dry humping trees really

ending made me shudder

[Delta Gamma]

Goosebumps, nice. At least that's what I thought of after reading.

ΔΓ

[Mehnlo]

245848 http://img.ponibooru.org/_images/b2d8ea9816f4115ebd734c7e53a695f5/46263%20-%20artist%3Apetirep%20fluttershy%20jesus.jpg

I just looked up "Jeesus petting fluttershy" Thank you for that, that picture makes me extremely happy and is now my desktop background.

[Fish Taco Truck]

Before reading: That must be nice, Fluttershy's dreams.
After: i1170.photobucket.com/albums/r537/sertheo/Screenshot2012-01-25at71523PM.png

Well done, you managed to give me a cliff hanger ending AND a fairly nice scare at what the fuck Angel bunny is. Though that was about on par with Moon Diary, well done at chilling me to the bone.

Overall I give it a 4.5/5.
Organization: is well done and is easy to flow throughout the entire story. Considering the end, it chilled me out even more and that had to be the most interesting thing... dark turns are always nice.
Ideas: were... disturbing, to say the least, but very well displayed.
Spelling mistakes: Nein.
Conventions: Well done and easily made out. Helped organization for the most part. Over all a quite scary story.

[The Commander]

245873
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Honestly that made the story for me. Seeing as I haven't been scared of anything since i watched the Exorcist when i was three.

[blakrok]

All she needs now is SAXTON HALE! and that bunny and everything else like it, is as good as dead.

[Iambrony]

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Good job SIR,,, you did marverlous, seriously WTF am I reading?

[ImpendingDoomxXx]

well my good sir, you have done a bang up job in writing a damn fine story. A few grammar problems, but great story line and effects, the ending could have been a little bit less scarring but what's done is done right?

[rhysofpeace]

"Several trees were dryhumping one another" .....funniest....mental.....image.....ever

[Manual Control]

390411
*Hasn't read story yet. Sees this comment.*
Well now I gotta read it...

[Agent Fluffy]

I did a reading of this. I hope you don't mind.