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PresentPerfect


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It's been five years since the Titan Ponies appeared in Equestria, and life is hard. But ponies are a resilient folk and have adapted, fighting back against the monsters with incredible feats of magic and technology. Though they have won many battles, the war continues, and their strength and spirits are running out. Now it's up to Erenshy and her friends to find a new way to overcome the Titan Pony plague. But will friendship be enough to turn back the tide when fighting the Titan Ponies hasn't?

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On that day, equinekind received a grim reminder that

Oh whatevs.

Seid ihr das Essen nein, wir sind der Jäger!

Will read.

Goddammit, Present.

This is what we needed.

At first, I thought I was making some sense out of it.

Then *spoilers* fluffy titan *spoilers*

I'm SO COFUSED

WHAT DI DI JUST READ

That was amazing and now I need to watch this anime. But yeah this was hilarious and the ending was brilliant. Good job.

OH LORD THE PUNS!!

I made it to Erenshy fully knowing what was to come, and I still lost it. Damn you, Present.

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3004611
That's why I stopped reading where I did. :D

FRIENDDDD.

Wat teh hell. And i thought the Titans from the show were retarded. LOL.

Twilight::facehoof:

What? Was it something i said?

I think you mixed up Eren with Armin

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3304862

DISCLAIMER: I have never watched Attack on Titan.

Welp, things went to hell in a hand-basket REAL fast in the show, and you've never read watched the show.Let's see where this goes...

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3357680
Uh, well, that's it. It's done. One-shot. :B

3358080
I didn't start reading it yet. It's on my track list.

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3358114
Ohhh, was unclear. :V

3359939
Shake ball and ask again. :derpytongue2:

Golly, talk about being loved to death!

It's Kyopon, not Kyoupon. The Kanji 巨 is read "Kyo"

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3469012
I thought for damn sure it was "Kyoujin". Oh well, it's not the first thing I got wrong about this!

Oh god, I almost died when Puella Sailor Applejack showed up. :rainbowlaugh:

That was bucking hilarious as hell.

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3489296
I just watched Madoka recently for the first time.

I find it very amusing that Appledoka died the way she did in this story. <.<

The pre-readers are right. This almost hurts, it's so inaccurate, but it's so amazing. Have a :moustache:

OH CELESTIA, THIS IS SO BUCKING COOL HOLY SHEEEEEEP!!!

How big does a titan pony need to get before it becomes a horse?

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3901777
PONY AM NEVER HORSE

Sorry... What the hell did I just read? I think I like it. It's totally OOC for Eren... he's more of an impulsive, angry, idiot, and Rainbow Dash would suit him better, I think... but at the same time, extremely amusing... I DO like this. :rainbowkiss::moustache::trollestia: I think... I LOVE it...! Ooooh yeah! XD :heart:

I'm gonna read it again... I like dat floofy titan. >:D

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4791664
Because its parents didn't love it enough.

3003606 hi i remember you did my story a long time ago :twilightblush:

This... was surprisingly good. I liked it. *Makes mental note to continue watching AoT*

I don't think we share the same sense of humor, but at least I got this read.

Funny ending, I'd give this 7/10. Probably 8 or 9 if I watched AoT recently and was able to put faces to names. Oh well.

NEVER EVER USE TUMBLR.

Just... Don't... Zoe is not transgender....

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6506797
Too late. :V

And I'm fine with trans Zoe, I mean who cares. :B

3901777 It doesnt matter how big the pony gets (though generically their under 15 hands(imguessinf celestia height)), because ponies and horses are ever so slightly genetically different, which is probably why the saddle Arabians in magic duel were a completely different shape to the ponies

:/ ... Well, okay, I'm going to try my luck here so, here we go: Like you, I've not watched Attack on Titan myself, personally (though I did see a little bit of it if it actually counts), but still there's a number of issues here (unfortunately)

Let's start off with the fact that the main characters here ... well, I don't think the names are actually necessary: you can just call them by their normal names you know. Erenshy, Arminlight, Reinbow Dash (just one letter on that one ... really ...) It's alright to call them by their normal names, there was no real reason to change their names to match the Attack on Titan characters. I can see how you tried the crossover effect here, but, it's still a crossover if they're the same characters in a different setting (just look at Fallout: Equestria for instance). As far as characterization though, I still see them as acting the way they should be, not many characters ending up out of line or anything like that, so, I'll give you that one. Nice how you just included some background characters like Derpy Hooves and Berry Punch as well (plus I see how Rainbow would be reluctant for letting Derpy fight the thing).

The ending I felt was, more or less ... meh. I know the world you crossed over with is a dark one and all that, but you really made the ending simply blunt as ever. Yeah, I see the reference you did, but I don't know if it works here. With so much seriousness going on with the issue beforehand, you suddenly throw in love fest, along with this random class 5 fluffy titan and everyone just ends up dead afterwards :ajbemused: ... oh boy. However, I guess I can let it slide, but only because you did put this as a "random" story, where it isn't supposed to be taken too seriously and random stuff is supposed to happen. That, and I do see the humor behind the concept of being loved to death, though the shipping joke seconds before kind of seemed out of place. They're about to die, why question it?

So, overall, I guess it's a basic one, though, I recommend that if you do try to crossover again, look at both worlds you're working with first. It's not a bad attempt by any means, many people still liked it after all, this is just my take on it that's all.

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6864298
Aw. :( Sorry you didn't like it, but thank you for taking the time to respond!

(before reading) GODDAMMIT
(while reading) GODDAMMIT btw the link is broken
(after reading) Were you high when writing this by any chance? Also, don't do everything tumblr says.

Conclusion: As someone who watched the show, this needs more walls to be accurate.

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8284463
Good catch on the link, thank you! :) And no, all highs are natural. :V

8284500
How do you come up with these things?

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8284506
I honestly don't know how I do anything. :B

8284995
I'm not going to take that literally.

Too literally.

Well.

Maybe.

Fine.

How do you exist, then?

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8284998
I don't know D:

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