Ship-writing, music-making Canadian Singaporean. Ex-military personnel, future teacher.
When some pony wakes up and finds herself unable to move, unable to talk, unable to even elicit any emotions, what can she do but stare at the darkness ahead?
Then the lights go on, and she realises something: it's better to be in blissful darkness than in living hell.
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Mind if y'all drop a few words to tell me how you feel about this story? I'd greatly appreciate it :)
Definitely getting a Twilight Zone feel. Pretty good though you could've made it a bit less obvious that it was a carousel until the end. All in all, a pretty good story.
This story was definitely interesting, and it gave me a some what scared feeling, like I myself was in the story. Although, I wish it had given some kind of an explanation, but otherwise, I really liked it
Those first few paragraphs...
Someone on FimFic finally managed to take me back here for a while, and I love you for that. Toward the end it kind of falls apart, though, and the errors start piling up.
Still: excellent job!
Was that from Twilight's point of view?