Well, fuck. Now THAT is how you do it.

Seriously, you managed to have me on edge reading a chapter that I basically already wrote. I cannot wait to see what you'll pull off once our storylines start drifting further apart.

I'm actually a little embarrassed to compare this to my own prologue now . Why did I think it would be a good idea to point all my fans this way again?

3006419 Give yourself more credit, I wouldn't have thought of the pregnancy game aspect on my own, and I'm still hoping you continue your story. Besides, I'm sure many people are going to prefer yours over mine, I do.

3006687 Haha, true, true. I guess I'm just being my own worst critic.
Nevertheless, my praise still stands. Excellent job, I can't wait to see it continue

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Strap yourselves in lads, we're in for a bumpy ride! Uh, any chance of preggo Twilight? Pretty please? Also, have an upvote because of reasons.

This is relevant to my kinky interests
Go on with the show!

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I'm definitely banking on Spike giving Twi and Shining some new slightly-scaly siblings before all's said and done.

Like to see Twi forget him again after that... Especially if she lends her mom a helping ovary or two.

Profound thanks to 3006419 for sending me (and other ponies) here. Now I have two delightfully depraved Discordian dissertations to digest as they update! I like the directions both are going, so do proceed.

Thank you 3006687 for writing this and thank you 3006419 for the fic that inspired it and for pointing readers of your fic to this one. Now we play the update waiting game.

3006687 It would probably make more sense if they dragged Twilight there Kicking and screaming when she had a book to read. I hate the garbage of peer pressure. (usually someone ends up with a bloody nose when they try to pressure me into something) also Overused meme for getting twi into a bad situation. would probably be even more interesting if Twi was excluded from the festivities and Discord initiated the game on all of her friends without her.
just saying fave and watching the story anyway cause it sorta pertains to my interests.

I'm only here for the plo- story... the story.
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Fun :D

incest, adultery, mild cum inflation, stomach bulges, one or more slutty OCs, rule 63 (gender bending), bestiality, hypnosis, futa, impregnation, enslavement,

Did you find a list of my fetishes and base a story off them?

<insert overused 'Dis Gonna Be Good' gif here>

I want this to be finished sir. That is an order.

So, is this thing ever going to continue? Why is it that one of the better ideas for dark MC never gets to be finished by anyone.

3303852 Going to continue it soon, a slight injury during some repairs to the house stalled it for a bit. Not completely healed yet but getting used to typing with a partially bandaged hand now.

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oh. get it healed first...

>reads description
Fucking insta-faved.
Literally everything about this story is relevant to my interests.

>finishes reading
Please for the love of Celestia continue this. If one more Mind-Control fic with this much promise goes inactive after only a couple chapters, I think I'm going to explode.

Huohoho! A fresh retelling of a favorite tale. I can't wait to see this come out.