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I write things. Feel free to commision a porn or non-porn thing for $0.01 a word. Price is per chapter.
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Well, fuck. Now THAT is how you do it.
Seriously, you managed to have me on edge reading a chapter that I basically already wrote. I cannot wait to see what you'll pull off once our storylines start drifting further apart.
I'm actually a little embarrassed to compare this to my own prologue now
. Why did I think it would be a good idea to point all my fans this way again? 
3006419 Give yourself more credit, I wouldn't have thought of the pregnancy game aspect on my own, and I'm still hoping you continue your story. Besides, I'm sure many people are going to prefer yours over mine, I do.
3006687 Haha, true, true. I guess I'm just being my own worst critic.
Nevertheless, my praise still stands. Excellent job, I can't wait to see it continue
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Uh, any chance of preggo Twilight? Pretty please? Also, have an upvote because of reasons.
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Strap yourselves in lads, we're in for a bumpy ride!
This is relevant to my kinky interests
Go on with the show!
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I'm definitely banking on Spike giving Twi and Shining some new slightly-scaly siblings before all's said and done.
Like to see Twi forget him again after that... Especially if she lends her mom a helping ovary or two.
Profound thanks to 3006419 for sending me (and other ponies) here. Now I have two delightfully depraved Discordian dissertations to digest as they update! I like the directions both are going, so do proceed.
Thank you 3006687 for writing this and thank you 3006419 for the fic that inspired it and for pointing readers of your fic to this one. Now we play the update waiting game.
3006687 It would probably make more sense if they dragged Twilight there Kicking and screaming when she had a book to read. I hate the garbage of peer pressure. (usually someone ends up with a bloody nose when they try to pressure me into something) also Overused meme for getting twi into a bad situation.
would probably be even more interesting if Twi was excluded from the festivities and Discord initiated the game on all of her friends without her.
just saying fave and watching the story anyway cause it sorta pertains to my interests.
I'm only here for the plo- story... the story.
images3.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20111230065257/mylittlecreative/images/d/da/Applejack_lie_face.gif
Fun :D
Did you find a list of my fetishes and base a story off them?
<insert overused 'Dis Gonna Be Good' gif here>
I want this to be finished sir. That is an order.
So, is this thing ever going to continue? Why is it that one of the better ideas for dark MC never gets to be finished by anyone.
3303852 Going to continue it soon, a slight injury during some repairs to the house stalled it for a bit. Not completely healed yet but getting used to typing with a partially bandaged hand now.
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oh. get it healed first...
>reads description
Fucking insta-faved.
Literally everything about this story is relevant to my interests.
>finishes reading
Please for the love of Celestia continue this. If one more Mind-Control fic with this much promise goes inactive after only a couple chapters, I think I'm going to explode.
Huohoho! A fresh retelling of a favorite tale. I can't wait to see this come out.
As long as the ball gag is tasteful, there shouldn't be a problem with that.
Did you lose a chunk of fic between those two paragraphs, or what? If the sudden transition was intentional (which is fine) then you need a divider of some kind. Could use one in a few other places up there too.
3441873 Good point about the dividers, added them now, but yes it was intentional. Thanks for the feedback.
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Much better. Also: Futaloo or Traploo? Awesome.
Yay, a new chapter
I find it amusing that you had an actual legitimate excuse for delays, and still managed to update faster than me
I see you've gone down the line of "everypony is promiscuous, and doesn't care who knows it." While I normally can't abide this in fics, I'll let it slide this time, since it might actually mean that the game has a greater impact on their lives.
I'm also really liking how you've set up the busy-ness of the character's lives. It oughta make it more poignant when they lose, and throw their whole schedule out of whack.
For as much as Zecora's dialogue was an obstacle for you, you certainly managed to handle it very well. I could feel the poetry exuding from her every line.
Well, so far really liking where this is going. Keep up the good work
Also you made the typo "preform" in Octavia's scene
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FutaLoo......definitely FutaLoo....
3442382 Thanks, was still hell getting the update up. Hoping to do one a month now that things have stopped going insane.
Also, while Vinyl, Mrs. Cake, Pinkie, and at least one or two other ponies that I'll leave for a surprise twist later are openly sexual, the rest aren't, or at least aren't publicly. Just for some reason the concept of the Cakes as swingers appeals to me, the party girl persona just seems to mesh well with the concept, and Zecora's appetites aren't known by the rest of the town.
Next chapter will have something similar, introducing four more characters to the game though only one in the flashback fashion. I can't help but feel it hurts the narrative as much as helps it, but that should be the last time it occurs. But Zecora's dialogue? Not worth it.
Stupid similar words.
Suddenly Discord
Suddenly plot
Suddenly things.
Do go on.
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I think it's a pretty good way of doing it, focusing bit-by-bit on each character to develop them more overall. It's made me consider whether I'm focusing too much on just the main characters.
Anyway, one other point I wanted to make is about the size of your paragraphs. I mean, they're not quite on wall-of-text level, but they are still a little... long. Particularly the opening one in this chapter.
At least you haven't committed the sin of having two characters speak in a single paragraph, though.
Oooooh, getting really excited for when things hit the fan!
I do hope we'll get to see some actual Mind Control next chapter, though? I can't wait!
God I'd love to see Discord put a permanent ball gag on Zecora just to shut her up!
.Then again, she might start humming, and she'd make those rhyme! 
3468127 Well I've finally found myself some time to continue working on this, but sadly Discord will not be gagging Zecora just yet.
I have someone completely different in mind for that honor, one of my favorite characters on the show in fact. That'll have to wait a few chapters however.
I hope this story will be faster than a Game of Estrus. Also, With Daring and Velvet, that's exactly my headcanon too
4366679 I hope I can start churning these out, but we'll see. As for Twilight Velvet and Daring, I kind of had to write around the show after saying she wrote Daring Do in the beginning. My friend actually came up with the idea of Daring sending her journals to Twi's mom to rewrite into fiction books.
Ahhhh, I fucking love this set-up!
The chance boxes are genius! They oughta add a whole new level to this game, I can't wait to see what ponies end up getting from them.
And the permanent HUD should make the sex scenes rather interesting, adding in some more tension when they can see their fate creeping toward them.
I didn't notice any problems, not even with pacing, and that's usually the big one that people tend to get wrong.
Evidently the time between chapters has been well spent.
Let the games begin! Those chance boxes should be an interesting element, can't wait fire more!
And so it begins. Who will fall first? Will the losers get any chapters showing thier new life? how will the stallions that become mares handle the new gender? All this and more are the things ieagerly wait to see answered!
it is "schweinehund", written with an "e" in the middle
also is a fictional animal that prevents you carried out your activities, but it is your laziness in reality and not a swear word.
It's good to see this fic Is not dead. I love this story and hope to read more chapters soon!
4366885 Might wanna toss up a source on that. Google's saying it's right both with and without the e. It also doesn't say anything about it being a mythological animal and not just calling someone both a pig and a dog.
With these chance boxes, I'm now hoping to see Twilight find one and it turns her into a stallion. Other than that, this sounds like it could be an interesting game.
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4368121 I'm fairly certain that's not only not a very reliable source, but also meant as a joke based on the curse, not the actual meaning.
4366728 Honestly, I wouldn't have have thought up the HUD on my own, but it just seemed too useful to limit to a one time use. Thanks by the way, pacing was the biggest thing I was worried about.
4366920 Hoping to kick myself to write parts of it, or one of the various other stories I have planned, during the weekends. Productivity's likely to dive again once Watch Dogs launches though.
Edit: Earlier edit was for noticing I claimed I would've thought up the HUD on my own. I would not have. This is why I need editors.
4368342 http://de.wikipedia.org/wiki/Innerer_Schweinehund
4368368 That likely proves your point, though I can't read it. Adding the e, but keeping the word there, as in this case Discord is preventing Photo from doing her job so the use of it works regardless.
Yay, maybe this story will get to the sex some time before S5!
I'm just kidding, take your time. This was good, I love those chance boxes. Can't wait for next update!
A few questions regarding OC: Would you prefer male or female characters? Rapists or rapees? Would you like for us to make a suggestion (box-induced gender change, for instance) or would you rather we just give you the basics and you let your imagination run wild?
As for canon characters: My fingers are crossed for Silver Spoon and Diamond Tiara to end up with Snips and Snails! Oh, the delicios irony of the two preppy rich bitches ending up with the loser squad is just too good to pass up! Especially since we know the boys like girls with an attitude...
I have high hopes for this fic, it seems like it's well filled out without being heavy.
4371795 Already have plans for all four of them actually, but they'll have their time to shine. Just not necessarily all at once.
For the submissions, either gender, and any fetishes that appeal to you, and for male characters any mares you'd specifically like to claim. For female characters, any stallions you'd like them to be claimed by. Fair warning however, those requests don't mean 100% your character will get to have them.
Is it wrong of me that I really, really, really want them to find the box with Discord's name in it?
Yeah, I'm sure the odds against that are ridiculous -- he always rigs the game in his favor -- but the fact that he left them that opportunity at all means they could, theoretically, find it. The thing about playing the odds are that odds are just odds; Charlie Bucket got a Golden Ticket from buying just two Wonka candy bars, and Prim Everdeen got called for the Hunger Games with just one lottery entry, her very first time, despite her sister having something like twelve entries every year for the past few years. It just takes one pony to get lucky.
Ideally, approximately thirty seconds after Twilight has just accidentally pulled the one that turns her into a stallion.