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DragonLS


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That was very good. Well done. :moustache:

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*Takes a bow*

Thank you for the compliment, good sir.

:twilightblush: i was hoping the one of the cakes would walk in.

Ah yes, I was pleased with this one....short and sweet :twilightsheepish:
Look forward to reading more from you :rainbowkiss:

Endorsed also (gosh, not the same as giving you a five star :raritydespair:)

Yes. That is most definitely Pinkamena Diane Pie, right there.

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I lol'd at the sweet part. Clever.

That's cool, I didn't want sanity anyway:pinkiecrazy:
Is Bibby Boo Boo from ed edd n eddy, as opposed to Bobby Blabby

239051

Congrats my friend, you win a cookie. :D

239052 Umm, after reading that, I'm okay. :twilightsheepish:

239055

Oh... right... uh... heh, sorry.

That was sweet. *ba tum tish*

And there I was... thinking that after the sweet sex (BAD PUN!) she would 'torture' him a la Cupcakes.
Dunno... the dark tag makes my opinions somewhat biased. :twilightsmile:

Actually, this gives me an idea...

As a personal Pinkie Pie fan, I can't help but love this one. Good job man, totally not where I thought this was going. Thumbs up.

This was very well written. I loved it! Pinkie and her candy fetish, oh my! :pinkiecrazy:

I gave pinkie alicorn powers in my fic... and yours scares the fuck out of me in the way an all powerful trickster goddess never could.

I hope Pinkie knows a good dentist.

Oh Gawd, i search for pinky pie and this comes up.....

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This fits this story soo much :pinkiecrazy:

(p.s Good show :moustache:)

Good show dear sir. good show i say. The lasts lines were particularly...tasty...:moustache:

I was somehow disgusted and curious at the same time. A good fic, very will writen indeed. Also the "Dark" label first scared me but it didn't turned out to be as bad as i've imagined. :pinkiehappy:

wtf dark tag? this is a clopfic? i will read........please dont send me to pony hell:raritydespair:

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It's not really dark... Just more of a twisted "wtf" kinda fanfic. But figured the dark tag was kinda fitting for it, imo.

This was like a weird mix between a clopfic and "Cupcakes"... but in a good way! :pinkiehappy::rainbowlaugh:
I actually laughed! This was damn funny in a way! :rainbowlaugh:
-Glassed

now i know why it has a dark tab.............:twilightsheepish:

the candy stallions name reminded me of bill cosby...........:pinkiehappy:

i demand R34 of this NOW!!!!

A candy pony... Interesting... Anouther candy clop.

if i didn't know this was a fanfiction, and that i knew Pinkie was candy obessed and kinda darkly predicted something like this, i be off candy....

:pinkiecrazy: "FOR-EVER!"

Couldn't said it better myself Pinkie.

Bibby-Boo-Boo?


...Sir, if that's an Ed, Edd, n Eddy reference, you earned five stars from me...

I read this while listening to the song Sound of Madness by Shinedown.
Something about this song and the story is creepy . . .

well, let's get this over with...

...

what...i don't even...:derpyderp1:

That was certainly unique and interesting.
Well done! :rainbowlaugh:

Good fic, except at the beginning the use of commas and the repetition of words gets a little excessive and a tad confusing, and just after she names the stallion you switch into the present tense for part of the paragraph. Other than that and a few more minor errors regarding grammar or the tense of verbs, it was well written. Good job :pinkiesmile:

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Yeah, every fic isn't perfect. We've all got our grammar flaws, unfortunately. D:

239051Darn, beat me to it. Oh well, good for you.:pinkiehappy:

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Yeah, I get that. Since I like when people point out flaws in my writing (constructively, not rudely) so I can do better next time, I thought I'd do the same for you. But like I said, other than those few instances, it was a good story with a really unique concept and otherwise very well written :pinkiehappy:

...it's labelled 'Dark' and 'Comedy'.

Ah hell, I'll give it a read.:rainbowwild:

EDIT: :ajbemused:

...no idea what I just read...

...good job...

...jerk...

...Did that really happened? Well...
What the actual fuck.
But anyway, nice one, I'm not much into clop-fics, but this one was good.
Good day :moustache:

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You could say it's...

*puts on sunglasses*

A Dark Comedy.

YEAAAHHHH!!!!

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Normally, I like dark comedy.

Normally, I hate vore.

...I'm filled with nothing but a slightly sticky indifference right now...

I don't know which scares me more. The part where she proceeded to eat the poor candy stallion starting with...you know... or the fact that I could almost see this happening.

Brilliant...but scary. Kudos.:moustache:

Both Prince and Pembroke side approve!:moustache:

I knew the risks and I still read let it be known today was the day I have lost my sanity:pinkiecrazy:

Sweet dreams are made of this...

~Morning Dart

a candy pony with a rainbow penis. uh thats interesting...............

Luckily I have no soul. Great read.

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