This story is a sequel to All things evil
Everything had gone according to plan... Twilight was saved, Nightmare Moon was defeated and The Elements were victorious.
Or so they thought.
Following the recent incident, Nightmare Moon strikes again, intent on revenge. Putting her grand scheme into motion.
The pieces are set, but which side will checkmate the other? Read on to find out!
In order to make sense of this story, I highly recommend reading 'All things evil' prior to reading this. The reason being one of the characters (Lunar Eclipse). It gives a basic understanding of the character and the story is also a prequel to this.
Darkness consumes you.
Why do you run?
We blind you. It blinds you.
All that is meaningful shall be drained from your body.
You will be a husk.
Let us corrupt you.
It is what the children command.
Darkness will be all.
There is no escaping, no hope.
You will fall,
And you will suffer.
The Darkness....
Let it rip you...
Let us rip you..
Why do you resist?
There is no chance of survival, you ponies.
Why do you not understand the commands of the children?
Let them torment you..
You are as worthless as sand...
You meaningless pieces of flesh and bone cannot do anything to stop the children.
They want to destroy you.
Why won't you let them?
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Okaaaaayyyyyyyyy... i'm gonna scroll up now
2941030 Ok that works for me!
2940642 Impressive poem.
corona? sun flare? who is being released?
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You'll have to wait and see although, hehe, i think you know.
Solar Flare, obviously
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Cookies for you!
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Thank you :)
Alrighty. Liked the last...
Let's see what you got with this one.
~Skeeter The Lurker
Great chapter. Looking forward to more!
This story has potential like the prequel, only problem was this didn't get 700 chapter views on the first day . I'm serious though THIS NEEDS MORE VIEWS!!!
Lucky you. I've posted a new chapter.
DUN DUN DUUUUN
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2940642 wow...
2941030 and that's why you don't do crystal meth kids
2942866 meh it could be better
When is the next chapter coming out?
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Honestly, I have no idea. I'm getting piled up with college work but, if its any consolation, I'll add a bit or even maybe finish and upload the next chapter tomorrow. Also throw into the equation that I have GTA 5 and yeeaaahhhh... But I just completed it so I can put more time into the story when I can.
Wait, no, where's chapter 8? *pauses, then anime gasps* Nooouuuu! Kidding, kidding, take your time, i really like this story, can't wait for what's next.
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funny cause I'm writing it right now.
New chapter guys! Enjoy it.
Man, i so can't wait for the next chapter. You're right i wasn't expecting Nightmare to say that. And i still can't believe you just find amazing pictures like these lol.
Oh ok now i see where pics come from lol
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Every now and again I look for stuff on deviantart. If it looks good enough I favourite it, luckily for me, I found a bunch of pictures about 2-3 weeks ago and that was among them, so I thought, why look for one, when there's a really good picture already in my favourites. And that's the story of how the picture ended up on the story.
The end
don't you just love happy endings?
Also, I've been wondering...
Who thinks I should submit this to EQD once finished?
Yeah, I think you should, alot of people would like reading your story. :D
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Depends if it even gets accepted. My last story failed their test miserably. Didn't even survive first page because of a stupid spelling error I never noticed.
pfft... Of course someone else would dislike my story. Oh well, their dislike does almost nothing to the overall rating of this story, so... ha.
Are you going to put more pictures like that of the rest of the Nightmare Mane 6?
So... Flare is basically Celestia + berserk mode?
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Well if you read back carefully, you'll see that Fluttershy and Pinkie Pie didn't get the spell cast on them. But if you want links to the rest of them I'll gladly put them in.
You see my original plan was to, have only a Nightmare Rainbow, but now I also want to include Nightmare Rarity, which is becoming more and more likely...
I'll keep you posted on this development though.
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yeah pretty much, which also means you don't want to piss her off or you'll be a Griffon's Christmas dinner.
3269917 id like to see those pics, Dashie never looked better IMHO
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I'll see if I can link them into the authors note.
Nightmare mane 6 pictures have been linked in the 'Chapter 7 - A Shocking Discovery' Authors note.
Enjoy them you guys!
many thanks for the links, they all r good looking bad girls...
2000 words for you fine people! I know, I'm just too kind.
Ooooooh maybe its Discord
Awesome chapter can't wait till the next one.
AAARRG you stole my story idea! I worked on this kind of thing for, like, EVER! You stoles it from us! The precious! (Yes Gollum reference)
How long till the next chaper?
3517876 I'm planning it out. Might start writing it after season 4 premier though.
3518945 Well the premiere came and went! jk I'm just happy it's continuing at all
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Haha, if anything the premier gave me a lot of inspiration. Lets just say I have plans for this story, it needs a bit more development before I deem it ready for the climax and conclusion. Also I plan on writing a final sequel after this is done and trust me when I say this, I'm going to make it as epic as I can. I just hope It will get a good reception.
Also the next chapter is currently being written and I have set a 'new chapter word count minimum' for my future chapters. This 'minimum' is 2,000 words. It seems that the word count can only increase from here, good news indeed.
So now we have Nightmare Spectrum, not a bad name I might add, who is basically another Lunar Eclipse?
3574745 yup only its a stronger version of the spell and has pretty much locked dash out completely. Sorry if fhere are any grammar errors. Im on my phone right now.
3574896 It's fine. I always liked the Nightmare 6 more than the Mane 6 anyways. (Lunar Eclipse and Nightmare Spectrum are best ship.)
This is sooo good, please make more if you have time!!!!!!
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Its part of a trilogy. Theres still the finale fic to go yet!
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So effectively EvilTwiDash?