Foalsitting job.
Heartwarming moment with Diamond Tiara.
"I'll be back tomorrow in the evening. Good luck Anon." Filthy rich says as he closes the door behind him. Why did you agree to foalsit Diamond tiara? 60 bits was a lot of money but Diamond will probably make you regret accepting that offer. However you're not going to let her win, you'll stay optimistic and happy until it’s all over.
"Okay, diamond it’s time for your bath." You shout, walking up the stairs up to her room. The door opens revealing the pink filly that now stood in front of you.
"Make this quick, the less time I spend with you the better." She says letting out an annoyed grunt. Both of you walk towards the bath, stopping at the sink and turning it on, filling the tub with water. Not to cold, but not too hot of course as everything must be perfect. When it’s full, Diamond Tiara steps closer to the water and starts inspecting it, she slowly sticks her hoof in it and then follows with the rest of her body. Phew, you did well.
"Do you want to play first? Or get straight to bathing?" You ask.
"Bathing, then I’m finally rid of you." She says turning her head away from you.
"Very well then." You grab some soap and a brush and begin scrubbing her back. Not to hard but still with enough power, as ordered from the little filly herself. Turning around you grab some shampoo and pour some on your hands, then you start kneading the shampoo in too her mane, making it some sort of massage. She tried her best not to show but she was obviously enjoying it. Soaping her tail and hooves was the last part, now it’s time to rinse. You turn on the sink and let water running, forming a bowl with your hands you start scooping up the water and pouring it over her small body, you were done fairly quick.
Stepping back you start searching for a towel, there are 2 towels on the table, a white one and a pink one. Hmm tough choice. You grab the pink one and step over back to diamond who has already leaped out of the tub. Starting with the front first you gently press the towel against her face, tapping a few times and then move on to her mane and coat. A little teasing could be fun, you think to yourself as when you reach her tummy you squeeze a bit. It alighted some small giggles but also a death glare from her.
"If you're done, you can go now. I can take care of myself." She says turning around and starting to move towards her room. Then an Idea pops up in your mind.
"I don't doubt that, but are you sure you don't want another massage?" You say stretching the last word. She stops right in her track and turns around, eyeing you with a confused look in her face.
"Why would you do that?"
"I don't mind taking care of you." You say with a grin. "Come downstairs, if you want I'll even brush your coat and mane." You say. It’s better to befriend that little monster than to have her as an enemy, you think to yourself. Diamond says nothing, she just looks at you still with a confused look on her face.
"I-I'll get the brush then." She mumbles a bit, walking towards her room and returning with a brush in her mouth. Smiling you walk down the stairs as she follows you. Entering the living room you sit down on the couch and tap twice on your lap. Again she eyes you with that confused face of hers.
"Come sit down." You say tapping on your lap once again. She hesitates for a moment but still walks towards you and lays herself on your lap. Again you begin kneading her head, moving your hands in circles. This time she does nothing to hide any signs of that she liked the massage, instead you could see a satisfied little smile. You start to slow down the movements and applying a little bit more pressure, causing her muscles to loosen a lot. When you notice she is fairly calm you move your hands to her back. Now using way more pressure you knead in to her back muscles. Damn, even fillies were hidden bodybuilders here in equestria, you think to yourself.
"Time to brush your mane and coat?" You ask at which she simply hums "mmhmm." You take that as a yes.
Grabbing ahold of the brush you slowly start brushing her mane until it was back to its normal state and all shiny again. Next up was her coat and tail, these two were a lot easier because you only had to brush in the same direction. By the time you were done Diamond Tiara already had her eyes closed and if you weren't mistaken she still had a small on her face. Mission success.
"It's time for bed, don’t worry I'll carry you." You say softly as you place your arms under her and lift her, she doesn't weigh too much and you easily bring her up the stairs and into her room. There you place her on her bed and tucked her in. Hmm, I might as well try my luck. Moving your head closer to hers you plant a small kiss on her forehead. At this she half opens her eyes and a big smile appears on her face.
"Goodnight anon." She says softly.
"Goodnight Diamond." You say walking out of her room and going back downstairs. You place yourself on the couch while thoughts flew through your mind. I NAILED IT, Yeah! I made peace with the enemy. Maybe it wasn't such a bad idea at all to accept the foalsitting job, you think to yourself while a yawn escapes your mouth. It’s probably bed time for you as well.
You stand up and start walking up the stairs towards the guest room, opening the door reveals a very tidy room with a 2 pony bed, a nightstand and the alternative entrance to the bathroom. Plopping yourself in the bed you instantly fall asleep.
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The next morning.
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Slowly you open your eyes and stretch your body. The bed felt so cozy and soft, you assume that filthy rich only has the best of the best in his house. Turning around you notice an object standing in the doorway. There stood Diamond Tiara with a smile on her face... You flinch at the sight of her and check your body for anything strange. Suddenly she starts galloping towards the bed, quickly you brace yourself for whatever she was going to do, but nothing happens. She lands next to you on the bed and simply looks at you.
"Morning sleepyhead, come on let's go!" She says enthusiastically while tugging at your arm.
"Go where?" You ask confused.
"You have to comb my hair again, and make breakfast."
"Oh yeah." You say standing up and following her down the stairs to the living room. For some reason she was actually bouncing the entire time and when you sit on the couch she leaps towards you, landing on your lap and nuzzling in to your chest.
"Err where is the brush?" You ask.
"Hmm?" She responds dreamily while still nuzzling into your chest.
"The brush, so I can comb your mane?"
"Oh yeah, the brush..." She quickly dashes towards table, grabs the brush and scoots back towards you.
"Here you are." She says dropping it next to you and cuddling herself close again. You wonder why she turned so friendly all of a sudden, but it’s better than her being a brat so you just deal with it.
After the combing session you walk to the kitchen, grab two bowls of cereal and return to the living room putting them on different ends of the table. The strange thing about this all was that Diamond Tiara never left your side, she just walked along with you and kept staring at you in the process, it was freaky but once again you shrug it off realizing this is better than having her being mad all the time. However when you sit down on the other side of the table she just readjusts the position of her bowl so that it would be right next to yours. Could have seen that one coming...
"So what do we have planned for today?" You ask breaking the silence.
"I need to go to the spa, and m-maybe we could...go for a walk in the park after?" She asks nervously pressing her hooves together.
"Sounds good."
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Both of you walked through the streets of pony Ville, on your way to the spa. Diamond was once again walking almost directly next to you the whole time. She seemed to be beaming of happiness. However at one moment you could overhear some ponies speaking to each other next to a building.
"Poor fellow, having to foalsit her."
"Yeah, I heard he was the only one to accept that offer, he's probably not the brightest tool in the shed."
Suddenly Diamond Tiara drops her head and increases the distance between the two of you. She probably heard them talking and If she wouldn't have changed so much you would probably agree with them, but in the current situation they were completely wrong.
"I'm glad I have to foalsit you, there is nothing better than spending time with you." You say trying to cheer her up.
"R-really?" She asks with hopeful eyes.
"Of course, they should be jealous of me instead."
She giggles in glee as she jumps up to your neck wrapping her forelegs around you nuzzling in to your cheek. You wrap your arms around her as well, making her hum in delight. She then turns her head around and sticks her tongue out at the ponies who spoke the words and returns to nuzzling you.
Diamond Tiara spends the rest of the trip sitting on your shoulders as you arrived at the spa. You put her down once you're inside as she pulls out a bag of bits and walks towards the counter. She returns with 2 tickets in her mouth. Apparently you were coming with her.
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"That was amazing." You say as you exit the spa, walking next to Diamond tiara.
"It was. Are we going to the park now?" She asks.
"If you want to, of course."
The walk towards the park is fairly silent, it was bugging you that she couldn't keep her eyes off you. She just kept on staring the whole time.
"Is there something wrong?" You ask.
"N-no I was just wondering, c-can you carry me again?" She asks with a blush on her face.
"On my shoulders you mean?"
"No I-I mean in your arms..." Her voice nearly mutes at the end of that sentence.
"Sure." You say bending over and picking her up. When you're standing once again she embraces you pressing her chest flat against yours.
Walking through the park with Diamond Tiara in your arms she speaks up when you near a bench.
"Can we sit down here?" She asks. You walk over to the bench and put her down there whilst you take a seat next to her. Placing her head on your shoulder she lets out a deep sigh.
"Anon, are you my friend?"
"What? Of course I’m your friend."
"H-have you ever thought of me being more than your friend?" She asks removing her head from your shoulder and looking deep into your eyes.
"Huh? As family? As my little sister or something?" You ask confused.
"No... As y-your ... Special somepony..."
You could swear you heard something click in your mind. It’s all obvious now, the kindness, the nuzzling, the carrying. She liked you. Well fuck…
"I'm sorry Diamond, but you're too young."
"Please! I'll pay anything... Please love me..."
You pull her close for a hug, and pass your hand through her mane.
"You can't buy love Diamond, and you don’t have to." You say pulling her close and planting a kiss on her cheek. You could feel a sudden shock through her spine as she looks at you with a surprised look on her face.
"I love you as a friend, I'm sure there are enough colts here in ponyville that would like to be your coltfriend." You say in calm tone.
She doesn't answer but just holds you tight as you share each other’s warmth in a cuddling embrace.
"You're father is going to be home anytime now. Shall we go?" You ask. You receive a single nod as she doesn't release you. Carrying it is then.
The walk home was a silent one, as she stayed in your embrace all the way until you were back on the couch. The moment you sat down you could hear the door open again as me rich walked in.
"Good evening Anonymous, I assume everything went well?"
"Yes, It was quite fun actually." You say looking over to Diamond Tiara who had separated herself from you.
"Excellent." He says reaching in to his saddle bag and passing you a bag of bits "your pay. Are you willing to do this again anytime soon?" He asks.
"Sure, don't hesitate to ask me." You say in an assuring tone.
"Very well then, until we meet again Anonymous." He waves as you walk towards the door. You exit and were about to start walking back home until you heard the door behind you again. When you turn around you’re assaulted by Diamond Tiara who takes a leap and wraps her hooves around you while she presses her cheek against yours.
"I'll miss you Anon." She whispers.
"I'll miss you too."
"Oh and Anon?"
"Yes?" You ask.
"Just friends." She says as she gives you a quick kiss on your cheek and runs back inside.
"Just friends indeed."
The End?!?
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Huh, that wasn't as bad as I expected it to be
. I like it.
2940371
how dare you expect it to be bad
JK
Glad you liked it anyway
I think I'm one of the few people out there that think Diamond is really an adorable filly.
Another nice little Heartwarming story from NightShader, though it felt like DT's affections arose too quickly. I still liked it though, and I'm going to continue waiting on that TS story that's been in the works. Thanks for the read!
I expected Diamond Tiara to be really bratty.
This was such a cute story, Diamond is like a little kitten. Seriously the Cutie Mark Crusaders are not even 1/3 as adorable as Diamond Tiara. Now you need to do one with Silver Spoon, or maybe even both of them together, the cuteness would be overflowing.
it was so adorable , good job
While I waw hoping for this.to be with an aged up Diamond it was still a very cute read.
Looking forward to the next one.
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At first that was my plan. But I figured that I want the fillies to stay fillies. Recently The CMC (each their own story) and Silverspoon were requested. They will probably stay fillies as well.
I keep screwing up derpy's story and twilight's story and Celstia's story, causing me to start all over again. Its beginning to frustrate me as they don't fit with any of my ideas. Other ponies will probably come first
I just hope Diamond Tiara isn't upset at being friendzoned.
2940791
Oh. Oh well. Maybe if there is ever a sequal it could be a real romance with an older her, and a different human.
In the meen time, can the one for the other fillies be cute little school romances with young humans around their age?
Sorry to hear that. The best thing to do is to just take a break from them then. Better to do that, than to force yourself to right while frustrated.
Sweet story. There were some spelling errors here and there but it was a nice story.
2941023
With another human? Are you suggesting me to make a story not written in second person?
Changing the age to young romance huh? As I has spoken earlier, I have a document of Romantic/sudden circumstances. These are filled with my own ideas, but also what other people recommend. When I find a pony that fits with it I make the story.
I have no young romance in my document atm so that will cause problems. I also like the concept of Anon ( you ) being Older, bigger and wiser as that causes attraction. I might try your idea of young romance with a story that doesn't have a human.
I agree with you on that I should take a temporary break from the stories that frustrate me. Thanks for the support
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If you find errors, please point them out as that helps me correct them.(not just saying cause i'm lazy)
Glad you liked it
2941085
Sorry. That came out wronge because of the way i read second person stories. I never read them as myself in it, but as seperate characters in each one. I don't see the 'you' as myself or the same character.
So then chances are the ones for the other fillies might be the same as this one, and not really a real romance?
That is unfortunate. Especially since you won't age up the fillies.
Except it won't be a real romance, unless it becomes a story of pedophilia.
If the character won't be human then what is the point of it being 'you'.
Your welcome.
2941208
With the pony it would no longer be "you" it would be a third person story.
It still can turn out to be aged up versions of them. If I am able to think up an idea or someone pm's me what they want it to be.
You are one of the most supportive of my followers so I'll try my best to make it an aged up version. I have decided however to push the heartwarming moments with fillies a bit back on my list as they are the least requested.
Really heart warming with a side of healthy heart failure.
Romance is dangerous when you have to deal with a bully but you still managed it.
I need to say there need to be more.
well done mate well done
Well I can only say 1 thing........ DAWWWWWW!!!
2940529 ur not the only 1 lol. If u get past the arrogance, she is adorable.
I love AiE's.
Good job Author-man, This was extremely adorable.
You're leaving me on the edge with that ''THE END?!?!?!''
Even DT has a little soft side in her. I daw'd
Another well written fic!
umm... i know it a silly question but... do anypony make storys like you do?
(I MEAN THAT YOUR CONTENT IS AWESOME! and i ask if anyone makes stories like you do...)
2950213
Hmm, I'm struggling with what you mean by that. Do you mean if I know anyone who is making Second person stories (youXanypony) ?
or just romance stories with ponies in general?
Pyro1011 is doing the same as me but he makes the stories longer and only has Fluttershy and Rainbowdash done atm, his stories also have sad parts in it, but you might like it if you liked mine.
2941264
Oh. Okay then.
So you will take request like that if you like them then? If that iz so can I please tell you of an idea for Bon-Bon?
I am?
Don't worry about it. Do what you want, and what comes easier.
Okay then. That is understandable.
Good luck with all of your endeavors.
2950913
Yes I take requests like that.
You are person number 5 that requests bon-bon. I'll probably have to do her then
2950917
Cool. So will it be okay if I send you that idea for Bon-Bon?
2950930 yes, if i like the idea I'll use it and put you in the description as the maker of the idea. You'll also be in my credits,description and biography.
2950935
I will send a note.
I NEED MORE STORIES LIKE THIS
2955966
Hehe, Show some love. Like,Fave maybe even follow...
Post who you want to see next in my blog post.
That was...
So...
KAWAII
that was a cute story
Deal with it...
Deal with it...
Deal with it...
*CLICK!*
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I want Diamond Tiara as a pet -kero.
Also, I could not help but listen to Barbie Girl as soon as hair combing was mentioned.
Do not proceed to judge me for the man that I am -kero.
That was cute. Wouldn't mind a sequel, maybe when she's older?
Raven: ............ I'm not even reading it, and this is my response to it.
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SPOILER ALERT!
Haha don't worry, unlike the other heartwarming moments this is only based on cuddling.
No actual romance, simply cuddling.
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Raven: Likely story.
There were punctuation errors, capitalization errors, multiple to/too errors, and other things of that nature. Have you ever thought of working with an editor?
3317710
Indeed, this story is not written perfectly. Well done Sherlock. You do reailize that your comment is wortheless right? Simply stating "This has grammar flaws." Is simply stupid.
As a matter of fact, I already have an editor, yet I refuse to remove errors from any of my older stories.
This all for a simple reason : I want to see my progress and I want to see if I'm getting better or worse. Ofcourse I can read through all my old stories with my editor and remove every single flaw, but why would I? This is fanfiction, all for the purpose to hone my skills and enjoy myself, ofcourse grammar needs to be "good" but that's not all to a story.
So, do you have an opinion on the story itself? Or am I wasting my time by responding to a comment with no kind of depth at all?
3319653
I've gently made that suggestion to a number of writers who do not, in fact, realize just how lacking their skills are. I was, in fact, trying to be helpful. Depending on your response, I might have even offered to work with you myself. But I can see that some people have no interest in someone trying to help them.
My opinion on the story? It's an unreadable piece of shit. And you, sir, are an asshole.
3320059
Oh boy, somebody is mad xD.
Anyways, your opinion still is incomplete because you failed to add correct arguments to enforce your statement.
I really, really dislike it when people simply say "the grammar is bad" because that is of completely no use to me at all. If it was your intention to maybe work with me, you could have just said so and maybe you could have made your comment a little bit more formal to make a good first impression.
Sadly, I do have to apologize for snapping at you because indeed, I was being an asshole and stooped in to the unforgiving mistake of misreading your comment and immediatly assuming you to be a random hater even though you had good intentions.
Seems that your comment still taught me something.
My sincere apologies, señor Elric.
3320119
Accepted.
You have. My complete attention sir he he he he he :) :) :) :) :) :)
Would you mind adding more chapters? I like this...more cuddling?
3350881 yeah pretty much
3350881 its annoying
and yeah