awww... I'm hoping the once a month updates are larger than this.

3135228 Ack, yes they will be - sorry about that! I kinda got stuck a bit. The next chapter will definitely be longer I promise

3135234 yay

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Thank you again! Actually Discord is going to play a pretty important part and I don't want to give it away

I didn't thinking he would have a part in this...

I think I comment here in the future. Using PM on fanfiction often gives me page errors.

Looks like you are doing better than I at the moment, my ratings are below average. Probably Human in Equestria are not really popular I guess. But I see how it goes with the more emotional chapters later.

Anyway, sorry again about being over negative earlier, when I was half asleep. I'm surprised nopony here had noticed the important descriptions of the area are not mentioned.

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3139216 -hugs- ^.^ Thanks again Nightfall

Found something interesting... Looks like your OC name is mentioned on Equestria Daily. I don't know what it is about though, but I can't view the YouTube video due to poor connection.

Here's the link, but be warned. There is some M rated stuff mentioned in the comments:
http://www.equestriadaily.com/2013/09/the-adventures-of-prince-dusk-shine.html?m=1

How's ya next chapter coming along by the way...?

3164102 Uh sugercube, Duskshine isn't my OC. An OC is an Original Character. Dusk Shine is rule 63 Twilight Sparkle. Rule 63 is an internet rule that says if there is a character, there is a version of that character as the opposite gender. You'll see how that comes in much later

Rarity is Elusive, Fluttershy is Butterscotch, Pinkie Pie is Bubble Berry, Rainbow Dash is Rainbow Blitz, um ... I think Applejack is the only one who's name doesn't change, though I could be wrong. OH! Celestia is Solaris, and Luna is Artemis.

As for the next chapter ... well to be honest I haven't gotten anything done on it, just caught a cold the other day and trying to get over it.

On a better note, I DO know where I'm going with it so it shouldn't take me long to actually get it written this time around OH! PM me if you wanna talk so we don't clog up the comments box okie dokie lokie?