I like girls with dicks, if you couldn't notice. Also stories that are stupid but amusing. And stupidly amusing stories involving girls with dicks. And sometimes without dicks.
When you're in a relationship, you shouldn't keep secrets, right? That's what Lyra thinks, anyway. Unfortunately, she probably should have brought this up sooner.
(warning 1: Despite the Teen rating, the story has futa-related subject matter, though not explicitly. If that's not your thing, just be aware.)
(warning 2: This isn't not as comedic as my other writing.)
Written for the futaquestria group's 2013 write-off.
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Well. That was indeed different than your usual.
I kinda liked it.
~Skeeter The Lurker
very nice! it shows true talent to be able to write a different type of story, and write it well. hats off to you sir.
How did you manage to write a story about a girl growing a penis, and make it un-sexy and not funny? I applaud you, sir.
Nice!
D'aw, this is cute.
I feel like if you're summary refers to Futa and such, it really deserves a mature rating.
2937341>>2937433>>2937441>>2938630>>2938631 Thanks. After writing so much not-as-serious stuff I wasn't sure if I could pull it off.
2939116 The story itself doesn't really contain anything that would merit a mature rating. Nothing sexual actually happens and even the discussion of it isn't explicit at all. Just because futa stuff is porn 99% of the time doesn't mean it all is.
She used to be college ? Or did she mean she was a college... Must have been some crazy spell
As for the story, it was pretty good. I don't know if you wanted to write something really dramatic, it felt rather light-hearted... Still very serious compared to your other stories of course.
Wow, your skills have yet to be matched. Your one of those, very few, writers that are able to just, seemingly effortlessly, add so much character into their work.... even if it is clop.
I waited to read this, and the anticipation was SO worth it. Also, Futaquestria FINALLY has something in the "Clopless" folder, so yay! Don't nobody write futa like you, Corny.
2952158>>2947014 Thanks. I was curious about how people would react to the lack of explicitness. Glad to know that you guys like it.
Although, it apparently didn't have the same sort of draw that my more explicit stories do.
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I think this story would draw more traffic if it was longer.
This is a short character piece, but because it's so short, there isn't much character development to get involved in, and there's not much plot (in either sense of that word.
) so people don't have a reason to come back and reread it. If this story went on longer, with more plot and/or characterization to get the readers hooked, we'd have far more reason to come back to it, and comment on it, and re-read parts, and you'd see considerably more views, maybe more than your more explicit works. 
3159282 Oh, I'm fully aware. It's just that I wrote it as a basically a side project for a write-off that had a limit of 4,000 words, and I basically just threw it out in between other fics, so I didn't want to sink too much time into it. I may revisit the concept later in more detail.
Dat double negative.
WOW. I absolutely loved every bit of it. Continue writing, please.
Eight months, and they haven't had sex? Or seen each other naked?
Not even in, like, a swimming pool or bathroom or something?
Wow.
3549775 I dated my ex girlfriend for two and a half years and we didn't have sex. But I definitely would have noticed a dick in her pants.
Heh, didn't think I'd see something like this around here. But I like it, like, a lot. I'd definitely read a continuation of this one, or something similar. Would fave again!