I'm a musician, My favorite charecter is Rainbow dash and I enjoy reading.
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There are a lot of ups and downs to being a musician. This is the story of how two musicians, one on top of the world, but still missing something. And the other at the bottom, not knowing what to do. find what there both looking for in a small bar in Manhattan.
(Humanized, Octavia/Scratch)
Special thanks to BronyDak for editing.
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Dude, this is excellent.
I eagerly await more.
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Thank you very much as soon as my proofreader is done with the second chapter I'll post it.
I am intrigued. Please proceed.
Can't get enough OctaScratch.
Let's give it a shot.
Edit soon to follow, standby...
Hmm. Rather slow paced, but it's a nice change from what I normally read. I'm going to have to follow this.
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I like the slow pace. it helps set the mood better. I have seen may stories go down because they were rushed. Take your time I say!
Really good first chapter, and great plot setup. Looking forward to more!
Though, the misspelled title is a bit off-putting.
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Thank you for seeing that I didn't even notice.
Pretty good so far , nice setup.
You have caught my interest, thus meaning... WE DEMAND MORE!
yes another Vinyl/Tani fic must read...and now fave
2484804 Then more you shall have.
I'm sorry it took a little longer than i had planed, finals week was kind of a pain on both me and my editor.
Noticed a fair number of basic errors, but they mean little, and I ain't gonna red-pen it.
This is absolutely fantabulous. I'll be keeping an eye on this!
~OvO
It seemed like this chapter could have continued, it just seems sort of... cut off.
I was so happy to see an update, but is was rather short, but Finals is important.
There were a few errors, but these bugged me the most
Siting on the couch
Should be sitting
Fanning innocence
Feigning
Bearing's she
Bearings, she
Otherwise, I love the chapter. Please don't rush to update, as school comes before multicolored ponies sometimes.
Ah, the dreaded Finals. Gods above, I hate them.
Your story, however, is good. I'm glad I stuck around for it. Hopefully updates will come out a wee bit faster... I mean, if that's okay with you.
2592771 Thank you for noticing those, and they have been fixed.
2593553 I will try and have them come out more frequently and I'm glad you both liked the chapter
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Quality over quantitiy, as they say. Take your time.
I look foreword to more. If it wasn't obvious enough, I'm a bit of an Octascratch fan. Especially the "scratch" part.
hmm if this is anything like dawn fades vinyl and octavia university days then im gonna red it
This story makes my face do that thing with the mouth... I think its called grin... Not positive tho
anyway it makes me do this
2660399 I'm glad to hear it.
Nice work,
Note to self. $100= friends
Still wish the chapters were longer though
Nice, as usual. Good job.
Who needs pepper spray when you have Vinyls mean right hook?
2660690 When you're struggling to make even enough money to have a place to stay it does indeed.
2661050 I know right, especially when their so drunk they can barley stand as it is.
Again, great chapter. But, are you having trouble with grammar and sentence structure?
That's a nice picture. Are you the artist?
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I agree
2676536 No sadly I am not but I have a link to the artist so that others can see his work.
More when?
2945995 I'm about half way done with the next chapter I've just been having a lot of things come up that I had to take care of first.
Woo another chapter! A good one too
Yay you're back!
I forgot how good this story is!!!!!
Their little talk was awesome as was the whole chapter. Apart from the last paragraph. It is too cliché and really hurts the overall feeling.
Good story so far but I sorta want to point out there are a few spelling errors in this chapter that make it sorta confusing, besides that it is good.
Reading, reading, reading, reading, rea-... there are no more chapters? Why does this have to run out so quickly?!
I spotted near-countless grammar errors and it's REALLY killing it for me. I'll stick with the story because I'm a sucker for OctaScratch, but please do try to find and fix all those errors.
Oh and here she comes now.
she was the one of the top cellists in the San Francisco Harmonics Orchestra a few years back.
Or
she was the top cellist in the San Francisco Harmonics Orchestra a few years back.
Well then here, the twenty is for my drinks tonight and feel free to keep what’s left form that, and the other is for her.”
Yes I am thank you, but I must ask where did you learn to do that
The last part of this sentence does not flow well, might I suggest
,let alone this club in particular
or
,let alone to this club in particular
or
,let alone to this particular club
While the points that Cyber Samurai made aren't wrong, the first slew of points he made weren't delivered very professionally (i.e. the way he or she said it wasn't very nice the first time around), but it is your job as an author to learn from your mistakes no matter how they were pointed out. After all you can only get better with practice. With these points said I hope you won't let this Diamond in the rough wither with the sands of time.
It's a rather cute story.
Nice storyboard and great way to start a (ahem) relationship between two very different musicians!!
Thank you for the good chapter.
ok. Thank you again.
Keep it up and take your time please I don't want you to get frustrated because of a dead line.
Since this story is most likely dead, I'll assume the club burned down and they all died.
Well it sure has been a while. I had nearly forgot about this story, but noticing it again I decided to finish it. So I'll be uploading the final chapters in the next few days. I don't know if anyone is still interested in this story, but if you are then thank you very much.
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I am! I am! Please finish it!