Twilight is awoken by a ruckus (or is it a fracas?) outside and discovers that Ponyville has been overrun with unusual creatures that are terrorizing the townsfolk. It is up to her to discover just what these creatures are and how to get rid of them.
Um... there's really not much I can say about this. 'Guess I'll have ta stick with
I SALUTE YOU SIR! This was magnificent! And hilarious of course.
This story reminds me how much I want to go to equestria, and how I would be diplomatic and non-creepy if I got there.
Also, HUG PONIES YAY!
I'm here from the discussion post on EqD where this very scenario was suggested! Great story; one highlight would be writing Zecora's rhyming dialogue.
I came, I saw, I lol'd. Good show, sir.
best pony
best government
Dude
The new and improved version is up!
I would like to thank the gracious editors over at SALT for their input. I couldn't have done this without you guys!