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Twilight Sparkle is a studious pony. A studious pony who knows a good quill when she sees one. Her latest shipment of quills isn't quite up to par, though, so she goes to Quills and Sofas to find out why. NOTE: this story is only "light dark." There is no gore or death.

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Kind of random, yet funny! That's an oddly specific subject for a letter to the Princess, though. . . I think Ponyville business are going to be seeing quite a few tax audits.

Good job.

This was awesome. Twilight special forces FTW. Hey are you going to follow up on that, because if you don't I would love to.

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The "special forces" line was basically a reference to the Mane 6 being the bearers of the Elements of Harmony and tasked with difficult duties, like getting rid of the dragon in Dragonshy.

If you want to go full on Rambo with them, be my guest.

606775 And that is what we call INSPIRATION. :raritystarry:

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The special forces line reminded me of Cold in Gardez's Michael Bay story. I loved it when Spike actually answered the question of what Twilight would do without him :rainbowlaugh:
I would have changed the ending to have Twilight already walking off to write the letter than hearing Davenport's last line but that's a little mean :p

I changed the tags from "Dark" and "Slice of Life" to "Dark" and "Random" even though the FAQ says those tags conflict. Personally, I don't think they do, particularly because this story is only "light dark" and has comedic elements. It seems to be a little bit of a "Dark Comedy", but that can't be easily conveyed by the available tags. EDIT: well, unless I literally give it "Dark" and "Comedy" tags, but I feel like that doesn't necessarily fit either.

For those who have read it, what tags do you think are appropriate?

Kudos for writing a fic that has my favorite pony in it! (a.i. Davenport). Have a watch.

Considering this had the dark tag I was thinking that the quills were being harvested from battery farms of pegasi foals or some‐such. This… this is actually rather mundane, all things considered.

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