• Published 14th Jul 2013
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The Pain Inside - Bakmah Genesis



Three years after their break up, Vinyl finally goes looking for Tavi to try and make things right.

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Three days later

Vinyl walked out of the hospital. She levitatated a bag of painkillers for her head and some other crappy she couldn't remember for her stomach. All her friends, except Tavi, came and bitched at her for not eating or drinking for six days and doing a concert.

She walked down the path into Ponyville. She looked around for somewhere relatively cheap to eat since she spent a shifload of money for the orchestra to come down to preform.

She spotted Octavia sitting alone at a small cafe table. Vinyl was about to take off her glasses when she remembered they broke her face's fall and we're broken. She approached Tavi who jumped as she saw her come up next her.

"Hey, I just got released and I wondered if I-" she was cut off as Tavi embraced her. Vinyl wrapped her hooves around her.

"You stupid, silly mare." she said, burying her head into Vinyls chest. Vinyl picked up Tacos head and kissed her.

She expected the mare to pull away and smack her or yell at her, instead, she pressed against hers. The stood like this for a few minutes before Vinyl broke off. Tavi cocked her head.

"I thought you wanted nothing to do with my sorry ass." she said, smiling. Tavi smiled at her and pecked her cheek.

"I think you proved yourself, even if you fell face first onto stage due to lack of food and water." Vinyl brought a hoof up and scratched behind her head and gave a small smile. Tavi kissed her again. "Come with me." she said, pulling Vinyl with her.

"What? No your place or mine?" asked Vinyl as she was dragged through the streets. Once they reached Tavi's house, she pushed Vinyl through the door.

Before she could react, Tavi kissed Vinyl and her back. Vinyl slowly lowered herself onto the couch, Tavi laying on top of her.

"Love me." whispered Tavi into Vinyls ear. She did.

Vinyl woke up next to Tavi. The mare was wrapped around her, nuzzling into her neck. Vinyl ran her hoof down Tacos thigh. Tavi wiggled around as she was tickled.

"Tavi?" asked Vinyl.

"Hmm?"

"Thank you. I love you more than anything and can't go on without you." A tear rolled down her face. Tavi kissed her on the forehead, calming the unicorn.
"I know. I love you too."

Author's Note:

Well that escalated quickly. That's the final chapter. I got another possibility in the work shop. Whether it's another OctiScratch is unknown. Until then, goosh bye.

Comments ( 10 )

Well...that was...okay.
It was too darn fast to be good, but the plot and ideas were too good to be bad. I'll like it, but I don't think I'm gonna fav.

Short n sweet but I like longer stories but this is good can't....... handle it! *head explodes*

her heand ran down Tacos thigh lol. i liked it u got my fave and like:rainbowlaugh:

She levitatated a bag of painkillers for her head and some other crappy she couldn't remember for her stomach.

crap.
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Decent fic. rushed, but decent.

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It was my first one so it has a good amount of errors

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Well for a first fic, it wasn't too bad. You've grown by leaps and bounds since this story.

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This was back when I wrote on my phone

When you find time, I do hope you are going to go back and fix all the errors. I've 'liked' and 'favorited' this in hopes that you do.

Vinyl picked up Tacos head and kissed her.

Vinyl ran her hoof down Tacos thigh.

I. Am. Dying.

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