An ancient artifact has been stolen by Chaos forces, Alpha squad, an 'elite?' squad is sent to an unknown world after it.
Their Mission: Retrieve the artifact, kill the bad guys, save the universe.
The catch? Don't blow up the world doing so...
*edit* 40k + MLP crossover, just an FYI... =P
I have to say, this was pretty decent. Being a warhammer 40K fan myself, I'm amazed I haven't seen a crossover earlier. That said, I did notice a couple spelling and grammar errors, but not enough to panic over. Anyway, as i said, a decent fic, and I will be tracking this. Keep up the good work my friend.
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Nopony expects the Inquisition. On a side note, pretty decent chapter. Still a couple spelling or grammar mistakes, but beyond that it's a good story.
Good chapter, looking forward to more.
326514 working on the grammar but thank you for at least reading it
326563 thank you!
333268 maaayyybe
333018 I don't know about that, she is one of the Elements of Harmony which are kind of the exact opposite of chaos. Then again there's Horus...crap don't tell me Twilight is going to go Horus on Celestia.
333651 wow can't believe someone found out my source of info...
yea I GM a dark heresy campaign, the characters in this story are my players, the dialogue is what they say/ act like too... which I thought was a nice change from the classic space nazi mind set of Imperials
I play board game, read the books, GM and play the video games... but their fluff is rather... iffy at best
333297 who knows
doubt twi'll go chaos she's practically already a deamon and celestia would be the equivalent of the arch-devel so the warp is just annoying her celestia and luna can cure her of the plague on her mind and the forces of chaos are going to have a shitty time killing pony's magic is always more powerfull than technology just cause it pierces straight through armor you have no defence against magic unleass you can use megic so both the space marines and the legion are screwed going against these pony's.
thats just my opinion on the metter.
and one more thing good story keep it up
339594 Thank Mr Sir http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ALufiFp2Zvk