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Alaborn


Somewhere in the USA. Probably older than you. And something about MLP:FIM makes me want to write stories. Unfortunately, being gainfully employed cuts into my writing time.

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Filthy Rich is a proud father today, watching his daughter graduate high school But not everypony is happy for their relationship!

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Winning with a Chimney Imp? I'm sorry, but that's just too unbelievable, even for Discord. :ajbemused:

Nice. I was amused.
Also, Gary Larsen reference ftw.

I'd love to play cards with Discord. :rainbowlaugh:

I feel kinda bad for Diamond there. She's a jerk but children don't deserve to be killed.

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Well, technically, he won by convincing his opponent it wasn't a Chimney Imp.

2840800 It was easy, he kept gaining life with Kraken's Eye and Moonlace.

2840800 Remember, it untaps for free!

It really sucks that this is a one-shot, I would lovelove LOVE to see more of it, extremely well written, entertaining, and fun to read (albeit a bit dark) GREAT JOB!!!

Loving the Larsen reference.

Oh, yeah, there was an actual story ... hmm, yeah, it was good too.

through this entire thng I was hopng diamond would see her error she didn't so she got what she deserved. and Ilaugh at you diamond HA.

Another fitting end for Diamond Tiara. :rainbowlaugh::pinkiehappy::twilightsheepish::yay:

I see your game, Alaborn. I get your niche. Throw up an apparently obvious and predictable story, and then reveal that we haven't been following who we think we have through the use of cleverly ambiguous writing. I also noticed this takes place about 20 years before Clean Slate. I guess Discord gets creative over the next few years.

Thanks for joining in on the prompting! We do have a central story for submitting responses, but there's no rule saying you have to use it. As long as there's more Diamond stories to go around, right?

2842623 Yes, I do enjoy the surprise reveal. There's one in this one, one in Clean Slate, and two in Crossing Over. And then there's Scootaloo's Secret, which starts off like your normal Orphanloo story.

Feel free to add a copy of this story to the Diamond Cutters anthology. I wasn't sure whether Diamond Tiara was treated well enough, though.

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As long as she's not being gouged with acid-laced pitchforks.

It could be sad, but It was funny... and I like it XDDDDDD

Heh. One of the few Scootorphan stories I genuinely enjoyed. Nice bit of karma for Diamond Tiara

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He was bluffing. At least it wasn't Scornful Egotist

2854148 You'll be glad you have Scornful Egotist on the battlefield when you go to cast Dispersal Shield, Rush of Knowledge, or Torrent of Fire, or when you're attacking with Ancient Ooze.

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Oh, I know the Egotist is amazing with CMC matters cards, it's just that Sombra should be thankful that at least the card wasn't mocking him along with Discord.:trollestia:

2855982 He is far more.

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