Oh! I didn't see you there. Pardon the mess. Make sure you don't step on my brilliance, because I know it's everywhere.
A mysterious unicorn sets up shop in Ponyville. He claims to be a simple toymaker, but not everything is as it seems. A magical artifact is stolen and only he can hope to recover it. With the help of some reluctant friends he pushes forward to save the world and the young filly that means the world to him.
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Where did those dislikes come from?
Finn reminds me of the classic Willy Wonka.
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Thanks! to be honest I was getting a bit discouraged about the poor reception, but I will keep writing anyway. Besides, I've barely made it through the exposition yet. It's just about to get good! 
Did I miss something? What was it he handed to Dinky?
2893400 That was an oversight on my part. He meant to give it to her, but she bolted before he could actually hand it over. I'll try editing that out to make it clearer.
What? No-one else got that Pinkie was using the Doctors typical answers?
DUN DUN DUUUUUUUUUUN the plot thickens...
(holy scrap next chapter!)
I was very, very concerned at Twilight's dream but then you had me almost in tears from laughing.
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That's exactly what I was going for. Give it a few more chapters and I might have to consider adding a Comedy tag.
Wonderful, now to see what Autie Gris-Gris is.
I have no idea why the site published this chapter before it was ready, but it is now fully written. Enjoy!