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Your poetic use of language is amazing.
Well this is a fine piece of fiction with great care taken to the words used. I wish I could do that but alas I cannot. If this is a work that you are not happy with then one you are happy with must be magnificent.
Anyway my attempts at better speech aside, Rarity without thinking has given Sweetie Belle a body image complex. I love Sweetie Belle, and she made her cry. Rarity you are mean.
A graceful story, and a beautiful riff on a remarkable mare.
I know Rarity is supposed to be the main focus here, but I feel like Pinkie immediately and hilariously steals the spotlight when she shows up.