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Yes I was really hoping this was going to update... I have to get on a plane in 20 min now I have something good to read.
Thank you
That was a satisfying conclusion to the recent events and yet this story still has room to grow. Lots of opportunities. Lots of booty.
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This is... starting to get ridiculous. And not in a good way.
Derrick is Super Badass Guy, Burdy's thickness was funny at first but now it's beyond old, Burdy keeps pulling guns out of hammerspace, he still somehow has money despite giving away thousands of bits to waitresses...
Edit: I feel that elements of your story either don't fit or are stagnanting.
4866337 don't bite the hand that feed's you.
DAFUQ happened to twilight and the others?????
4866337 I do understand, but! Burdy's thickness is only the way it is due to his inner conflicting emotions about his real... ahem REAL mother (And with him having sex with Twilight hasn't made it better) and his traumatized childhood (Which has something to do with Derreck that I'm going to delve into during one of the chapters that'll be coming out soon) I know it seems like a ridiculous amount of guns to a regular average person but so far he's only got like... five. Belladonna, Heather, Applebloom, Violet, Nightshade and No-Name... I guess that's like six... I mean, compared to the like... twenty something guns that I'm not including in the story that I have dangling around my home... my grandfather actually lost... LOST one of the guns somewhere, either in the house or in the shop... I mean, how the hell do you lose a gun in your own home? I mean seriously, one of these days I'm gonna find it under a couch cushion or something (It's a .22 rifle so it shouldn't be hard to find) I know it's a hard story to wrap your head around and you can't really relate to this guy (Maybe you can but probably not) but that's what makes it kinda interesting. It's something new and different
Awesome.
Oh and that song.
Every chapter is more interesting than the last. Love the Metal Gear references here.
I am getting the feeling that somewhere down the line Burdy is gonna be roped into the catsuit shtick by twi,and then suddenly he's solid fucking snake....I mean...gray hair....eyepatch....rediculously macho....brain gives him the voice of christopher walkin....
4879140 It happens when your story gets featured. Everytime I get a story featured on that little box on the front page, I just groan, cause I know I'm also gonna have hate mail, then a bunch of comments telling me either the story sucks, or that I should stop writing all together. I just shrug and am like "I just worked fourteen hours on a farm... fuck off!" ah-ha, well, I don't say that to them but meh.
4886479 Just ask me... or well, ask anyone who knows me well enough to know. Dense as a brick wall... as Lassie would say "Don't think about it, you'll probably just have an aneurysm"
i want to like this story, i really do, but i can't keep going. let it be known that i read up to chapter 20 before i got so frustrated with how agonizing reading the scenes between him and twilight was that i gave up. my main problem is that burdy just outright started calling twilight mom for seemingly no reason. i mean, sure she gave him a place to stay but thats about it before he starts calling her mom. It was a fun ride, and i would have enjoyed some more interactions between him and daring do, but the scenes between burdy and twilight were too painful to read.
on a side note: don't let anyone tell you that you didn't earn my upvote. this story did have it's flaws but what i read was interesting and i may come back to it later.
Imma just say this story is confusing the hell outta me . . . . But I god damn love it.
Why has Discord lost most of his power? Being chaotic good instead of chaotic neutral doesn't mean he should have less power.
He can warp reality, drink solids, turn milk into explosives, add/remove appendages, turn night into day and back again every other minute and so on. He should be able to thaw out the entire city with the snap of his fingers with no adverse affects so way is he so weak? I just don't get it.
You need to study up on some damn hydrophysics. And Discord needs to not be such a useless incompetent. Past that, interesting read.
Well discord is no longer evil...
I think but that phrase though
"I am evil but not your kind of evil" that was epic
4917646 Only plausible thing I can think of is that he's literally JUST been reformed recently, like within the past couple days, and he's still somewhat weakened from being turned to stone. Again.
Either that, or his thinking throughout this is so worried and... orderly, that he doesn't believe enough that he could do as such. Remember, Burdy's magic is belief-based, and I've read a couple fics where draconequi are only as powerful as they think they are, and that's why Discord believes himself to be all powerful over chaos.
Which is another thing about hum in this fic so far. You can't have fun pulling pranks without ponies to pull pranks on, so him not liking killing works well with, at the last, my headcanon that he'd think of death as boring and orderly; life is always chaotic, his entire being and existence practically relies on others living as well.
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I just got reminded of something...if you had the ability to warp reality, and could have pokeballs, would you have thought of the idea to have pinkie use aneurysm?
Also, a chapter back: "She very graciously clanked him in the back of the head, not hard and rather quietly. She quickly stripped his clothes without another chef noticing and stuffed his bare body in a pantry cupboard, figuring somepony would find him or he’d simply wake up."
hitman much? Or a different game.
Brilliant! XD