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I assume this Kianna is a new character in Equestria? Should be interesting...
It was the fact that he was actually focused on the energy and such wasn't it?
Is the woman from Earth coming to Equestria? That will be interesting...
Evan, Evan, Evan...
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Stop using the M-word and get laid! There are several mares in town almost offering themselves to the guy and he is still limited by morals.
For real: That guy should stop to care about human morals and start living again, he's the only human on the planet... yet. And if they don't come up with something better than Tetanus potions anytime soon, he WILL become a unicorn with the horn rising from the crotch in a permanent erection. Seriously, I begin to think the doc is ordered by Twilight to forcefeed the potions to Evan just to get him more willing for sex.
cockblocked by stupidity again
Author, aren't you dragging this whole mom thing out a bit, 16 chapters later and he is dumber than a sack of dog shit. I have a friend who is a bit like this character and his pecker at least holds his hand and directs his head to the right choice when necessary. This is a really good story no doubt, but lesbi-honest, this is quite irritating. Hopefully he will at least grow a brain cell when heat season comes around for twilight.
-Sincerely, your faithful little nit-picker
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I am just waiting for him to go to the bathroom ad the toilet is clogged and tries to use magic to fix it but it completely backfires and hilarity ensues.
I couldnt keep my face straight!
Ridiculously funtacular!
So, Burdy isn't so good at math either? (32 - 9 = 23)
Oh GOD DAMNIT!!!.....I cant go two fucking weeks without hearing or seeing mention of Tim Fucking Hortons.......Newfie rage...Its a weird thing
Is evan going to save equestria like this
OK, so i get that he swears a lot but I feel like him swearing almost every sentence just degrades from the story.
Burned through 3 chapters and I have to say, well done. Please continue typing.
Poor Twilight and Sweetie. They need to get together and form a 'clueless love interests' help group.
Wat happened to chrysalis?
don't know if you know this but the Kamehameha isn't at all a magical force but uses ki energy which is a type of willpower per say, with my nit picking out of the way i gotta say i hope he uses that in a battle against tristan like when gohan fought cell at the end.
Schwarzenegger firing destructive energy blasts from his hands....seems legit.
well thanks for killing my dreams lol
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so reading most of the comments on this chapter and it seems no one owns up to ever trying to do a ki blast? then let me be the first to say I triad it along with the sonic boom from street fighter. (don't judge me!)
That . . . was . . . EPIC!
Now I want to go to equestria so badly right now
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but being magic, he wanted that to happen, so something similar happened.
Many lolz were had.
Destructive magic Illegal?!?!!! Bullshit!!!
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I know right!? If I'm in equestria, learning magic, I wanna blow stuff up! XD just kidding.
I realize this story has been completed but budding writers can learn from the comments. This protagonist has the behavior, maturity and self control of my 5 year old niece. A human in Equestria should at least behave as representative of the species. It is like traveling to another country and acting like a dick it makes it bad for those that follow.
Said Evan to the rape victim, whipping his goddamn cock out...
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Actually, that's just your opinion on how the story should be, sorry. In this particular universe, Evan the Dense got transported, so that's what you get. You don't have a problem with the writing (which could use a lot of editing, by the by), you have a problem with the characterization - which has nothing to do with it. That's the character the Author wanted to write, so that's the character he wrote. :-)
He probably should behave better, but... what's his in-universe incentive to? What's the point? The way he behaves - it fits the story, the characterization, and functions as fairly consistent foreshadowing. In short, it works.
Besides, the whole point - I think - is about how he changes over the course of the story. I mean, we're already at a point where he doesn't shoot things because it'd be fun, actually cares enough to help out around town... etc.
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Destructive magic in Equestria would probably serve about as much purpose as explosives do on Earth. It would make sense for unlicensed use of such to be punishable under law, I think. I mean, outside of the US (and Equestria is mostly not like the US, from what I see), explosives and weapons are generally heavily regulated.
Congrats Burdy, you just realized you are now even way less evil than your Mother of All Monsters, b**** of a mother.
Its at this point i stop reading. redneck genes and jokes aside its been months if not a year and no1 living with an actual sexdrive is this dense
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she got a puppy
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he doesn't want to fuck them fuzzy ponies yet
Oy wai Twi, it doesn't help in the slightest that you never correct him calling you mom. What feelings you talking about after that? Fucking decide.
I feel attacked.
im sorry im just having a hard time taking this seriously lmao. still fun
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yes
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yeah man i really liked her she was so cute
they went to chilli's