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I'm surprised he didn't end it by saying "damn it Hearth." Or perhaps, "you brought this upon yourself." (The xoxo in the card and the mistletoe that made the two kiss. Yeah. That would take some serious brain connection on Evan's part. ... Wouldn't happen...)
“Ben… BEN!” Well, Burdy is out to the Dagobah system now!
And admit it, Twilight only wanted him to grope her flank AND I bet she placed that mistletoe there herself in order to dance him there 'just by accident'
I can't help but notice that everytime he takes a weapon with him, he starts shooting or knifing something or someone with it along the chapter. Maybe Evan should use his wits for a change?
Also... we really have to work on the M-word... It ruins everything.
Very touching. Kudos.
That's right twilight get your man
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hahaha yeah, calling twilight mom so much is really kinda odd, but i guess he does it so he doesnt develop emotional interest in her, kinda like how he treats other mares of ponyville.
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You mean mom?
Yeah, just feels weird.
Evan sounds like a bit of a jerk from this sentence. What if it was Rarity? I'd think Spike would be fine with that.
And 'Weird friends'. Really? He finds the mane 6 (excluding Twilight) weird? But the thing he just fought not weird?
I don't mean that I dislike this chapter at all!
Just wanted to point things out.
Burdy, you stupid fuckin' fuck.
3678982 But remember, this predates the chapters we've been reading thus far (I should've left a notice to read when it occurred) so he's still stuck in the mindset that everything is weird and ga... homosexual. To put it in proper perspective, imagine yourself arriving in Teletubie land, a sane person wouldn't just say "HURRAY! I love this place and want to live here forever and make love to the..." well whatever the fuck Teletubies are, weird ass fucking fat things with televisions for stomachs... goddamn creepy. Anyway, I'm ranting.
Yes he seems out of character this chapter but that's because this was based shortly after he arrived, rather then the current time. (That probably makes no sense)
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I understood.
Not knowing what Telletubbies must've helped.
The only thing I didn't get was:
Predates? Like 'earlier'?
...
I can't wait until Burdy realizes that twilight wan'ts the D
Badly
Erm,Burdy wins,Fatality?
3682596 Well because everything has been happening in 2014 right, well this chapter happened during the Christmas of 2013, so all the things he's learned about with friendship didn't happen yet during that chapter because it was kind of like a prequel... it happened just after he arrived, during the few months that the story skipped over, when he was just reclused in the basement.
omg incest alert
just something I've noticed is that uploads get really slow for December.
I love being eased into relationships, but this is a bit too slow. I feel like absolutely no progress is being made. I love the story mind you, but the evan and twilight thing is driving me nuts. I'll give you that this chapter was a huge step forward, I'm really hoping there will be more like this much more frequently.
This story has evolved into something great.
Everyone blames Burdy for being so thick, but it is also Twilight's fault actually... I mean he KEEPS calling her MOM and Twilight should understand that he is seeing her more as part of the family. You just don't call your Boyfriend, Girlfriend, Coltfriend, Marefriend MOOOOM! If SO, somethings defenitly NOT right, and that is something Twilight should have seriously picked up on until now, since he already called her that a couple of times. Therefore she should have already tried (seriously tried) to set this "misunderstanding" straight and confessed to him straightforward, since this seems to be the only way he understands.
You know just to compare, it's the same as if Twilight would suddenly try to make out with Spike, out of the blue with no explaination to him whatsoever and the poor dragon would be confused, just like Burdy, as to why his somewhat mother figure would do or want that...
IT'S NOT RIGHT TWILIGHT!!! AT LEAST CLEAR UP THAT SITUATION OR ELSE LET HIM BE!!!
Seriously, with Twilight being the intelligent one of those two, you'd expect HER to grasp thier current relationship status by his OBVIOUS remarks... BUUUT NOOO! Twilight needs to stay all dreamy, even doesn't mind him calling her MOTHER... You know what? Screw that! Maybe it's her little fetish or something, or perhaps she thinks it is his little fetish to call her that, whatever! Now please excuse me while sob in a corner about their display of stupidity (especially Twilight's)
Wait I'm confused. The date on this chapter is 2013 but the previous chapters taked plsce in 2014. What's up with that?
4155932 Because it went back in time to past events. I wanted to do a Christmas-y chapter but not just rush through a bunch of months to get there. Then I thought "Hey... why not send Burdy out to get mommy a Christmas, err... Hearth's Warming present... and have him fight a mythical snow creature and meet Equestria's version of Santa"
jesus Christ! How dense can one fucker be?! I mean, Seriously!
That part when the windigo and Hearth...just, feels?
And the alicorns that are alive aren't mean...so people would help them because they're nice, like would you give money to a bully are some nice person?
Other than that, doesn't matter. (My thinking when she said people help alicorns for greedy reasons, to me, it wouldn't really matter)
this Sheldon Cooper is so like a Japanese anime virginal character tho it allows more sexual tension for extended periods of time. Sheldon Cooper takes down the mistletoe to not kiss the mares even tho is ok non romantically kissing Twilight. He is 18 probably been horny for 4 years.
My response would have been "I'm planning on hibernating till Spring..."
I've seen black holes less dense.
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Forget black holes I've seen darkmatter less dense
I want to ask Discord to enchant his pants in a way that every time he calls Twi his mom they give him a wedgie. Or even fucking think that!
I hate this type of a character in anime. Well, at least he have a tiny shred of a reason to act like that, but that only infuriates me a tiny bit less.
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Well, actually dark matter literally is less dense or at least supposed to be since we kinda can't detect it.
Cute!
Yeah, Twilight. Sneak a five-second Prencher in there!