Rainbow Dash thought that life could not get any better; a new job,getting married,and a new house.She thought nothing could ever ruin this beautiful dream come true.But everything changes when Rocket gets drafted to protect the outer borders of Equestria;the picturesque dream gets shattered.After a while Rainbow gets a letter telling her of her husband’s fate,causing her to become heart sick.When Rainbow Dash suddenly collapses during weather duty,and is rushed to the emergency room,her life is changed forever.
The challenge : Write and edit a story in under 30 minutes.
For feels listen to this http://youtu.be/S-Xm7s9eGxU and http://www.rainymood.com/
Chapters (4)
Beautiful
but way too rushed
good for a 2 minute read
2961289 Thank you, I only had 30 minutes to write/edit it. My brother bet me that I couldn't write a sadfic in under 30 minutes.
For a 30 minute challenge this rocks! You should definitely go over and re do this properly when you get the chance
3159697 Thank you, I will soon.
For a challenge this was a very good story. I'm normally not a fan of sad fics, but this one held me until the end. And it did actually make me a little sad. Good work.