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MaeceusMan


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Among the historical records kept in the Canterlot archives, one document is considered particularly valuable, for it is the only such record to have survived in any legible form to the modern era.

The document in question is the diary of a young colt who entered into the service of the Palace of Discord, known then as the Court of Chaos.

We have recreated the document here in its entirety for you to consider.

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Pretty interesting. I liked it and haen't seen much like it before. The way you used the changes in writing style to show character change was highly effective as a method of illustrating instead of just telling us that things are different. I like this piece. As it stands, you get 6/10 flutteryays, which is just above average.
:yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::fluttershyouch::fluttershyouch::fluttershyouch::fluttershyouch:

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