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neat
LOL WAT NO
There are too much HIE-s where superpowered tragic humans just stick their dick in a pony,in the name of romance and soap.
LOVE THIS ONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
could u have made that fight any more like one i would see in a Super Sentai final battle? i swear i has the theme for Shinkenger going through my head as Midnight delivered the finisher...
Celestia?
3083907 I'm calling Fausticorn
No elder dragon this time? No conversation with his past? OK.
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Still good job, as always. However, I find the concept of CMC Artillery to be utterly terrifying.
3084356 I thought the whole "conversation with his past", as you put it, was pointless and didn't make sense. As for the lack of the elder dragon, Midnight was trained to fight multiple opponints, not one big enemy. Plus I felt it would be good to give him a rematch.
3084675
I must have read too far into it in the original. I was convinced the mention of his sealed spark thingy during the conversation with the past was the reason why the Elements pulled him into Equestria.
I thought it took the randomness out of the equation.
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I just realized that I'm analyzing this rewrite the same way I approach movies based on books I've read.
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I'm going to stop telling you how to write your story. Have a nice day.
you love your cliff hangers don't you
3084895 Yeah, judging this by the original isn't a good idea. Yes, this one is very similar to the original, but it's about to take a whole different turn in Act II.
3084953 Yes... Yes I do.
3084983 takes a minecraft raw fish and slaps you
*keeps watching with blood shot eyes* More pwease.....
3084983 also here's a pizza
3085439 Mmm. Sushi and pizza.
interesting page, it explains how midnight became bearer ofthe element of the guardian.
3085494 hello i got all my stuff to kill slendy
3085493 a bit of spit on my face sushi i say wishfully
3085545 awsome, but I think he has escaped into a 4th dimension for now.
3085607 will that stop us we have pinkie with us i think yeah after looking at all our transmissions
A fine chapter indeed. Only one other thing to say.
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But really, I think it's closer to a Kamen Rider battle, what with it being one hero vs one or more opponents instead of a coordinated team against the opponents. Maybe Decade's Ride The Wind would be adequate, seeing as he did spend a couple of episodes in the Shinkenger world. Personally, I'd like to see a finisher kind of like that of the Faiz Edge: swing the sword upwards along the ground, sending a wave of energy at the foe, suspending it above the ground before coming in and slashing it to explosion/disintegration.
The only riders I can think of that have anything resembling a shield are various Ryuki riders, OOO with the Kujaku medal, and Fourze's Shield switch, so that's not too useful. Heck, shields are not that common in Super Sentai either.
3086514 i was thinking more of the mecha battle when the monster goes super sized, i havnt watched a lot of Kamen Rider, but i am working my way through Den-o
3086529 Den-O is a good one. Very silly at times, especially with the interactions between Ryotaro's imagin.
There was one episode of Gekiranger (mid 40s area) that made a reference to Den-O through the Gekirangers posing like their respectively colored imagin.
3086788 not that far yet, we only just met the fourth on. guys a bit of a dick but at least hes a good dancer...cant seem to shoot wirth a damn though...
Wow a grate chapter!! I can't wait for the next. Pleas let it be soon.
Dragonfox
getsuga tenshou!!!
I must agree with you, this version is much better than the original.
Holy throne! That cliffhanger!