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I'm really glad you enjoyed it, especially the fact that there was at least a little bit of plot :) Both Flutterdash1 and I tend to like stories with our clop, so that's what we tried to deliver.

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Yay for passion! I feel very strongly, so I'm glad when I can make that come out in a story, especially a co-written one. Thanks for commenting!

To everyone: hope you like the new chapter!

It got a rise from me! (looks down and mumbles with a blush)

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Now that's what I like: some nice, thick praise
Glad you enjoyed the squishy bits!

thank you for this follow up chapter. again,very well played. you'll have to excuse the royal canterlot voice here.

ahem..

HOLY GOD FLUTTERSHY TOPPING A.J!!??!!!
that....that was the most awesome,shy,and cute dmination EVER!!
i hope you,dear author,continue your forays into romantic clop. far superior to flat out clop i personally believe.
now you stay there while i do umm whatever i want is now best line ever.
and now i leave you with the words of the great philosopher Socrates.
" i drank what? "

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Oh squee! This was such a great comment to read - it made me so happy! Thank you!

It's especially rewarding because my co-writer and I had a long discussion about that very thing: the challenge of writing Flutters being even playfully toppy. So I'm double glad it worked for you!

Light and laughter,
SongCoyote

2887547i just calls them as i sees them and i see following you now. write on so talentless fucks like me can keep enjoying.

Twas good. Very good.

8 out of 10 mustaches.

2887547 nice I loved it man I would ask u to write another chap but u don't mess with perfection but a sequal might be in the near future maybe?

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Glad you liked it! Not sure about a sequel, though I do have more ideas to write about. Maybe a longer, more involved story (but still with cloppy bits as I love writing those)....

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Thank you kindly! Those mustaches tickle
I must admit to some curiosity as to what I could improve to earn those other two, though. Maybe a PM if you could spare a moment? I like constructive criticism!

2890285 awsome dude thnx

2890285To be an Applejack, I don't know how to PM

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It's easy! At the top of the screen, next to the Browse drop-down, is a little envelope icon. Click that and you'll be taken to the message center, which looks like any ol' e-mail setup. Then click Compose Message, put in the handle of the recipient (I'm SongCoyote) and you're ready to go!

I look forward to hearing from you if you have the time

2887156 I sure did like what you wrote, can't wait to see more from you!

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Thank you very much! This has definitely inspired me to write more. I hope I can keep up the good work

Beautifully well written story. I loved how you kept the fic light hearted even with the sad fluttershy moment in chapters 1 & 2. I would love to see a sequel to this, how do apple jacks family take it? How do they thank rarity and rainbow for helping them? And how do the rest of their friends take them being together?

Overall a well written story, with a nice plot line.
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Thank you for your very kind comment! You're not the first to ask about the potential reactions of family and friends... and now that I think on it, continuing this story to become more than just a quick clopfic might be really fun. I'm blushingly pleased that some readers like it enough to request that!

As I've said, this has been a very inspiring experience, and I will definitely write more, possibly with my collaborator on this one (Flutterdash1). Thanks for taking the time to offer some praise - I really appreciate it.

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Yes, yes she is. In more ways than one!

Glad you're enjoying the story. Thanks for dropping by, and especially for taking the time to leave a cheery comment!

Light and laughter,
SongCoyote

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"plot" line? heh...

this was so much fun to read! i love it. keep up the good work!

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Thank you so much for stopping by to read after I commented on your post! And thank you again for taking the time to leave a comment, especially such a happy one. I'll gladly take my lumps when needed but good cheer is always nice.

I'm very glad you liked the story. I'll write more once the holidays are over and the editing and co-writing projects I'm currently working on are complete.

Have a wonderful day and then some!

Light and laughter,
SongCoyote

I am the view number 333 yay :D. Now to bussiness wow seriously that was great clop, and i love it when this kind of stories doesnt go just directly to sex without an argument, really nice job :D

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Thanks for the nice comment, and I'm glad you liked the story, clop and all! Any clop I write will have at least some story around it; that's just how I approach such things. To me it adds an important aspect to the interaction that is, if not actually necessary per se, important and dear to my heart.

Put another way: sex is fun and good; love moves the universe

Light and laughter,
SongCoyote

While I am afraid this is not a story meant for me [1], I am fond of this phrase in the description:

but it's Rainbow Dash finally thwacking Applejack with a clue-by-four

1: I mean, It's on my read later list now, but so are 1056 other stories.

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*snort of amazed laughter* 1056 stories in Read Later? I thought my list was long, but it's currently under 100! Wow. At least you'll not lack for reading material if you ever decide to chill for a week or two!

Thanks for the honesty; not every story is for everypony, of course, and I understand that. Hopefully if/when you get around to it you'll at least find it tolerable / vaguely amusing, cup of tea or not

Thanks for stopping by, and have a wonderful day!

Light and laughter,
SongCoyote

Outstanding! I like romantic clop. In my opinion, it's the only successful way to write clop, otherwise it's just... I don't actually have a way to describe what I think of just clop, so I'm gunna write "bleh", just bleh. It's more enjoyable when it has heart in it. I give you a like and a favorite, and possibly a follow
Write on, just, write on

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Oh my! You are too kind.

I'm so glad you enjoyed the story! Romantic clop is in all probability the only kind I'll write, and I am working on more. Thanks for reading and enjoying my story, and especially for taking the time to comment! It means a lot to me

Light and laughter,
SongCoyote

You're welcome I enjoy the reading and it's cool when people appreciate my comments

I love cutie-clop!!!

6922798 Why, thank you indeed! I'm very glad you enjoyed the story, especially as it was my first here! I appreciate your taking the time to comment, too. It's particularly nice to get praise nearly three years after I posted!

Light and laughter,
SongCoyote

6923037 I did not notice how old it was. Great story.

A lovely little, cute, funny and titillating tale. Thanks for the read!

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Thanks for dropping in to read my story! I'm glad you enjoyed it - it was fun to write

Light and laughter,
SongCoyote