After the secret of the Rainbow factory came out and Rainbow Dash was arrested, this story is set some 2 months after, whats happening to Rainbow Dash in the dungeons, and who is this unlikely saviour.
This is my first ever fanfic, i know there will be a few mistakes in here, but bear with me.
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Right, i've read though all the chapters and am in the process of tidying them up.
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While the story is pretty good, I'd give one bit of advice-- Slow down a bit. The story would be a lot more enjoyable with the spelling, grammar, capitalization, and punctuation problems fixed. I know the drive to breeze through it, but any writing is much better received if you take the time to avoid little mistakes like those.
If you can, it's also a good idea to have a pre-reader to run it through. I don't always have much time thanks to school, but if you wish I could help you tidy it up a bit?
Like I say though, liking the story thus far, it's certainly an interesting path to go with.
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thanks for the tips.
i'll be tidying up the chapters over the next few days as i've re-written some of them.