Long ago in the beautiful kingdom of love and prosperity, a queen ruled over the kingdom.
Her fur of white,
Her mane of teal,
and her crown of gold.
The subjects loved her dearly, until the night of the ball.
Then she was kidnapped.
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I enjoyed your story! No grammar issues I have seen although I don't have the most keen of sight. All in all it was a very enjoyable short read and hope to see more!
2808982 makes sence, I kinda guess as such. It's a good story all the same
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Thank you! I'm working on the chapters length. :)
2811201 your welcome!
Daawwww.......
Poor Crissy/leisha.
This is good if not a bit short
3702226
I know, its still a work in progress. My chapters are progressively getting longer, as well as the story.
3702269
I see keep it up though I like it
And now...
the moment you've all been waiting for... 
after these messages! 
Moar plz
i have waited so long for this!
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I know.
But I am going to be able to post a good amount of chapters because I have the chance. 
4561822 yay
That was very sad.
But I can make it better!
Here's King Sombrero!
Good idea, bad execution. Characters are flat.
Wow, this is an emotionally impacting story... I like it. its a nice way to move a loving pony to one who must feed upon it to live. I admire what you have done.
coolsies! I really like how this is so well written. It sure beats my crappy story.
What?
"My name is not BUDDY!"
"And it's not IncrediBoy, either!"
oh..is there going to be drama between the jailer and the prisoner...?