(My first fic ever feel free to comment and enjoy...)
Long ago before Discord and Nightmare moon, there existed a third Alicorn who governed the cosmos before Celestia and Luna but he was soon corrupted by the Temptation of Chaos,and was banished amongst the stars. It is foretold in ancient prophecy that upon the return of the Blue Star, the End of Times shall come.
Twilight soon encounters a strange pony named Ovan Starshine. Who is he and what is his significance to the The Legend?
Twilight and her friends will soon know what it means to be Wielder of the Elements of Harmony as they become entangled with Ovan's fight against a certain group of ponies bent on resurrecting this Legendary Alicorn
Chapters (22)
I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes.
thanks 7Dashie7...
Ohhhhhhh Twilight+Ovan ohhh yea....I see what you did there
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I await the first kiss
Yea, I see a kiss coming on for sure, I always look for the romance in these stories, one is coming for sure
I saw everthing i see the hints
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and when it comes I will be like
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Because there is A KISS!
thanks brony4ever that really made me Smile Smile Smile
In Chapter 9, I'm trying out to expand the timeline so that the story might not feel cramped up in one day...
IMpressive!
I think this chapter earns you a watch.
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What chapter?
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Chapter 11..
In her carelessness, she accidentally bumped into a certain green mare. “Watch where you’re going!” the mare shouted at Twilight.
“Sorry about that, I was just thinking and—“Twilight apologized but she was interrupted to moment she saw who she bumped into.
“YOU!” both Fran and Twilight pointed at each other at the same time
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(My face after reading this line)
One more chapter to go for this one i know i have failed in this fic but thanks for at least giving the time to read this. But i will do a sequel for this one hoping for a fresh new start. I hope that it will turn out with better ratings and views.
You guys can also check out my other work "The Queen's Shining Armor"
This is so good I can all most rainbow kiss you
My OC is SilverStar so funny