when is the next chapter coming. this story is awsome
Very good story, seems a bit rushed, but good.
This is quite rushed, but the premise is good! Also, mandatory meeting with the princesses!
I agree it is rushed but has a whole lot of potential. Don't be afraid to slow down and add more details. Good job though.
I will be re writing the first two chapters. I feel as well it is terribly rushed but I wrote this as 2 am so I was pretty tired. Thanks for the feedback!
when is the next chapter coming. this story is awsome
Very good story, seems a bit rushed, but good.
This is quite rushed, but the premise is good! Also, mandatory meeting with the princesses!
I agree it is rushed but has a whole lot of potential. Don't be afraid to slow down and add more details. Good job though.
I will be re writing the first two chapters. I feel as well it is terribly rushed but I wrote this as 2 am so I was pretty tired. Thanks for the feedback!