Rainboom_Flash
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I love this thumbs up
Wat u doin? Pls staph!
Have my thumbs up. Put it wherever you want, if you know what I mean, eh?
YOU ARE AN IDIOT!!! LEARN TO WRITE!
This got riffed to pieces.
You are drunk go and get a Reality check now OR BE MOLESTED
My eyes have been raped.
I had to stop reading after the 5th paragraph, before I went full retard.
agreed, but I think my dick just killed itself.
This is perfect, I must send this to BrendanielReads on YouTube.
Okay THAT hurt my eyes.
Did you even stop to see all the typos you made? Did you even intend to write a story, or did you just write this because you were horny and you have some sick pony fetish? I couldn't read the whole story and I had to re-read several paragraphs twice so I could understand what it said. Seriously, get a proof reader or just don't write shit like this at all.
Oh and by the way, it's a story, not a roleplay. You don't use *one week later* or whatever. You simply say, A week passed or something. Seriously, get it in gear.
Oh and
FOR THE LOVE OF GOD DO NOT CONTINUE THIS STORY UNLESS YOU PLAN ON WRITING LIKE A NORMAL PERSON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
thsi was a gr8 reead tnkx, il liked ++ favroited.
i cant weigte for next edishen pleasee thanxx
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The sequel is already up!
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I'm reading it now, actually.
This. This should be on EqD.
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Thank you!
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Dude even though it's a little short, I still like it.
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I'm not sure how you failed to realize this, but this story is very obviously a satire of poorly-written fanfiction. The typos and misspellings are all rather obviously engineered. If you look at it again, you'll see what I mean. Even actual bad writers with no concept of spelling or grammar don't write this poorly. It's satire.
This story DOES make a good Tiffany Test, though.
By reading the comments I knew it was another one of 'those' stories, but I decided 'fuck it, let's read it'
I lol'd as my brain screamed in agony (in a good way)
Whelp that's all I have to say, cheers
LEL DIDN'T READ FGGT HUEKEK
*thumbs up + fav*
maor pls.
I rofl'd while my brain screamed and my eyes burned out of my head. The misspellings and grammar errors made me
more than anything else! I wouldn't call this good...it's probably the worst-spelling and worst-grammar story ever. I'm surprised it ever passed inspection. 
You might like this. No, seriously, it's relevant.