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The long awaited sequel to The Marvellous Adventures of Spike the Pervert and Rarity's Revenge: Wrath of the Semen God.

After Rarity defeated the Semen King in order to resurrect Spike in the last of the series, the once-thought-dead enemy returns to seek his vengeance against the beautiful unicorn that harmed him. Can Twilight save the day before Rarity is changed for the forever worse?

Author's Note: Only my third fic, so please be nice with the criticisms! Hope you enjoy! :twilightsmile:

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 18 )

That title made me inhale my tea in surprise. I wish this was simply a quintessential statement of surprise, but the burning sensation in my everywhere makes this pretty bloody real. Goddamn, that's a lot of dislikes on the previous story. Now to find out why...

Edit: Why isn't this published.

Why is this a thing. Tell me why.

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You don't like it? I tried so hard to make it better than the last ones... :fluttercry:

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I am not judging by its quality because I haven't read it. I'm asking what drove you to name it... that. Was it your intention to be audacious and... obscene?

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It's a continuation of my previous stories, so I thought the name fit. :moustache:

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Your previous stories involved a semen god. You are writing a story that has ponies and a... semen god. Forgive me for being somewhat hesitant to accept such a thing.

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I thought that people would like it :pinkiesad2:

Uhh.... I think the title itself will be driving off a few readers. :pinkiesick::fluttercry:

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I'm sure there's an audience for your work in this strange, strange fanbase. You keep on doing what you find fun and I'll take my leave.

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Okay! Thank you for being so nice! :pinkiehappy:

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Is this one better than the last one? :applejackconfused:

Is it wrong that I find this somewhat amusing?

Would you like me to do a dramatic reading of this story?

...what? :derpyderp1: This... This is amazing :rainbowlaugh:

The first was, quite frankly, better.The misspellings and grammatical errors made me laugh...

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