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Amor was the former king of the changeling hive, but disappeared shortly before the attack on Canterlot not many knew exactly what happened or even if there was a reason. In this story, we follow Amor in his journey from the hive and on his adventure. Will he find what he is looking for?
[This is my first story, so be honest of what you think about it]
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Well, this is new. A Self Insert Changeling. Usually, SIs would make themselves Alicorn Seventh Element Gary Stus, but you have a fresh new idea on the world of Self Inserts.
Have a like!
2705823Thank you!
Actually pretty good! for your first time making a novel, it is pretty good!
HAVE SOME LIKES!
Aw. Shoot story was going to have the same title:-) well back to the drawing board, liking the story so far
the story is coming along quite well! I have much more written then is posted, and im actually writing this a lot faster than I thought I would!
and to all who have commented, sorry that I haven't responded yet, but thank you all!
Any pony think that there should be a changling emotecon
2760522 agreed.
Story? too long? I CALL BS ON WHOEVER SAID THIS TO YOU!
FOR THEIR CRIMES AGAINST THE CHANGELING KINGDOM THEY MUST DIE FOR TREASON AND BETRAYAL!
Love the story, please keep going. It's nice to see something like this!
2761170 I actually said that to myself, so thank you for the encouragement! right now, I actually have chapter 19 complete, and am working on 20 so it's getting there.
Also, 100 views! i'm proud of myself!
A fun way of getting rid of timberwolves. And it would be a foolish creature that would try to prey on changelings.
Beautiful.
2796775 thank you!
I loved writing this chapter, good change of pace for once.
i am one of them
2845996 and I thank you for that
I'm reminding you to try and rhyme again... MUHAHAHAHAHA...
but seriously... *cough* keep going... like how it's going so far.
2859808 really? I feel like i'm going a bit off topic.
2862377 Well I can say you did well for trying, I thought the rhyming was really good and OK for the story... considering... it was just me...
2863195 either way, thank you for the encouragement!
And then comes the awkward moment where someone... is going to ask for permission of your characters and have clop...
*hint hint* what? you thought it was me? Pssh, I would but I'm using my own characters!
Chrysalis is probably going to be more forceful with this state she's going in. Changelings beware, the former queen in becoming cocky!
2865747 I love some of these comments, they always make me laugh.
You hid this? Heh, job well done...
YOU HAVE FINISHED THE MISSION, you've completed this under pressure from everyone else and have made a wonderful story about a self-created original changeling, you have Chrysalis there, you have someone who is actually knowing wrong from right... etc... etc...
Well Signore, If a sequel does come out I hope for it!
2870093 oh trust me, it will.
2872008 You know what I'm still expecting from this... someone to ask for clop or to use your characters in clop...
As I said before, I would do so... but I'm busy typing it out with my own characters...
2872227 as...uh...thoughtful, as the offer would be, I would have to say no to anyone. I would find it hard to imagine Amor, or any of my personas, in that kind of...story. thanks for thinking about me though.
2873489 Well at least your knowledgeable, I know what people do when they abuse peoples characters when they take them from their original stories.
I've seen things happen that should never... have um... happened...
2874753 i'd ask for an example, but I really don't want to know
The Changeling Queen ^_^
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you know its at this point i dropped this story, it was good until that damn pure of heart spell.
teh things like oh you dont want to pe peaceful and conform here let me FIX you
its altering what makes a person,
now if all it does is camn them down im fine with it but that spell rubs me the wrong way.
3522210 I know
. at the time it seemed like a somewhat good idea, but looking back it was just stupid. if I would have thought about it more, I probably could have done better, but it's too late now.
thanks for being honest
3524763 by the way do you know what happens when you put a human that has a ph.d in quantum and normal physics, then give magic and put him in MLP?
3525433 no, what
3525457 something far worse than discord
also helps the guy is a military nut and was Real Time Strategy gamer
3525609 still don't get it. sorry
3525945 it wasnt a joke
3526200
3526212 hey you want a story idea?
3526473 i'm not really good with other people's ideas, or mine to be honest.
thank you for offering though
Great story L0ST
Teen.....
*hmmmm* hey L0ST why is it classified as teen?
3586667 some bloody scenes. and very minor sexual themes
Minor? please explain
3597474 nothing really happens. it's just...suggested for lack of a better word
3597646 I know what MINOR means you incoherent fool!
I ment to say which part had that minor sexual scene.
3597750 the worse is in Finishing Touches, but like I said, it's only suggestive. nothing ever happens
Oh hey....
I think I know you!
your that one fellow from youtube huh?
L0St is in it?
3600032 I am on youtube
my name isn't the same though, I go by my real name
hold up...
oak?
3600315 Oak?! no no I'm certainly not a tree... but anywho... May I ask you a question?
3600386 you may
and sorry, I thought you were someone I know