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Sunlight

1000 years is a long time, but some memories... you can't forget. For Celestia, those were the darkest, most terrifying, days of her life. She was only a filly when the battle for her crown began. How did Celestia come to be the fair and just ruler we all know today? If you dive deep enough in the memories of this princess of the sun... you may find your answers.

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Retsamoreh

Retsamoreh #1 · Oct 23rd, 2013 · · 2 · Chapter 1: The Royal Life ·

You really need an editor. As in really badly. I qualify but quite frankly I only skimmed it, got the jist that it wasn't something I wanted a part of, and then took my precious time to write this comment. Try looking around editor's groups - I'm even in a few though mostly for observation. They're a gamble, but can be profitable if you're a newbie.

I won't thumbs this down simply because, apparently unlike some people, I don't wander around fimfic thumbing things down without telling at least why.

Good luck, and hopefully someday you'll write something that others can truly enjoy on the basis of it being legitimately good rather than them having poor tastes. I sincerely wish the best for you.

Rainbow Hyphen