"Get off of me Trixie."
"Nope."
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Cover Art by Egophailic
Editing/Proofreading by EchoTheWolf
Now readings by TheaterCritic
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2667937
This...I like this.
my reaction in order.
though you have a little mistake at the beginning. you wrote Their in Ponyville, not Thy're in Ponyville.
Asides that funny little story. I like it.
Interesting.
Could use a major spelling/grammar check, but a pretty intriguing plot.
*they're
Trixie you shouldn't make Twilight mad
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2668089 AH CREEPER!!!
This story deserves the 'fuck yeah' hand sign.
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The first thing you would get out of the title:
Clopfic
Funny story, and a pleasure to read and approve. Could use an editor or proofreader, especially to correct your inconsistent tenses, but it doesn't distract from the silliness too much. Good work.
umm.. wha?
Yes
I think this is the first time someone has made Trixie sit on Twilight without shipping them together. Nice job avoiding a cliche.
not gonna lie the cover art is the best part of this lol that face
...I have lost my ability to reason with my brain, which has managed to rally up my spleen, my appendix and one of my kidneys in a rebellion against the tyrant, my spine, and it's assistant, my small intestine. Hope you're happy.
Heh, Trixie on top of Twilight without shipping or clop?
2669509 I'm sorry for your loss. Have a derpy Batman:
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2669975
Great, now you got the large intestine trying to destroy my lungs.
2669993 When youre insides rebel LET THEM EAT CAKE.
Leaving aside the theme of this fic, I couldn´t but appreciate the irony of the Bearer of Friendship, raising into an alicorn princess by the sheer magic of Friendship, being unable to maintain her relationships.
Maybe Trixie secretly wants to be her friend... what?! I´m not crazy!
Can't wait for the next chapter XD
Trixie is never going to get off do you better get used to it."
I think you mean "so".
I have only read the title and i alretty like it
Trixie: thats because The Great And Powerful Trixie is in it
Me:No, its because your so dang stuborn and your being a nusence like always
Trixie: Oh well excuse The Great And Powerful Trixie for being so awsome!
Me:
2672694 " Well excuuuuuse me, princess."
I approve of this 100%
I fail to understand three dislikes.
I like this line. I think here's where I realized that this was going to be funny.
Also, I would stare too.
Good fic so far, this is the only thingsthat's not so good
I hate stories like these; they're supposed to be funny and I can see the humor, it's just that the logic is so bloody ridicules that I can't stop myself from getting annoyed.
If you were the pretty princess pony, what would be the first thing that you would think of doing if a person who was pretty damn close to executing somebody, Trixie was getting pretty loco and the wheel manufacturer in ponyville hadn't made it out of town in time, suddenly jumped on your back and would just teleport back on every you got her off. Would it be; one, accept the scenario and continue on as usual, or two, call the goddamn guards, who kinda suck at this point, and having her taken away............yeah, I don't need to tell you.
Sorry about that, it's just that I've read three fanfics in a row now with ridicules reasoning and I couldn't take it anymore. It is funny, but just not for me I guess. Keep at it, because obviously I'm one of the minority here.
I don't know what this is but I love it.
Simple enough, easy to like
I hope this ends with Trixie finally getting off Twi's back (literally) and Twi admitting that with Trixie gone, she feels like something is missing
Or the fun way of having Twilight be the one "on top", so to speak.
2674227 Hey everyone has their opinions
Thank you for your input 
Your cover image/title/description had me rollin'. I gave it a read just 'cause of how much that made me laugh. Enjoy your thumbs up.
Fabulous!
>across the years you stooped being just Trixie.
> Now you are nothing but a parasitic lump hanging on Princess Twilight.
>you have neither mouth nor eyes.
>you can just hear for as you only have ears.
>you are terrified 200 years after Princess Twilight ascension she took the power and rends of Equestria . After doing so she submerged it in an endless reign of terror.
>She sees what you think , you know it , she is well beyond capable of doing those kind things...
"Ticking Trixie ticking"
>Endless surges now trough you , it's such an horrible that you can not describe but if you could hope to give an approximation it would be as if every bone in your body is now breaking , all the time.
>you are Trixie Lulamoon, you have no mouth and you must scream!
2674740
Well sorry for sounding like an ass anyway, and thanks for not taking my comment the wrong way.
Why not? I guess... I'm gonna follow this here story.
This should be interesting.
I died from laughter. But it needs proofreading.
2676928 Yes, I'm looking into that right now
2676938 COUGHCOUGHpickmeCOUGH COUGH!
2676944 EchoTheWolf will you be my proofreadly proofreader?
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2676965 I do!
Bit of a weird way to end, and you definitely need an editor. Commas where there shouldn't be are all over the place, and the tense changes often even in the same sentence. All the same, I can't really complain about a fic based on that picture.
Tracking this!
2677595 I'm getting the edited chapter right now.
2677595 Already taken care of!
I love it. Must have more!
Clicked on the story because of the picture, and I wasn't disappointed after reading. Oh sweet Celestia, my cheeks hurt from the smiles.
This is... Yeah.
I'm following this one.
~Skeeter The Lurker
Twilight should have just smacked Trixie over the head with something heavy until she fell unconscious, and then given her to the Royal guards.Alternately, do what Celestia does in these situations... TO THE MOON WITH YOU!
Amusing premise, Twilight having to cart Trixie around whilst she clings on like a limpet, I might continue to read it.